Vijay Pandit Poet Sonnet

Allure of Your Love

Sure there’s love in splendor of budding rose
And scent of fragrance in garden of spring
And banks of meadows where the river flows--
Where soft winds whisper and the Blue Jays sing,

When you appear in the sight of full moon
Cuddling my heart in embrace of romance
Evoking plum desires as heartbeats croon
Enamored in trance of your loving glance,

Seeing my smile in allure of your eyes
Mesmerized by thrill of enchanting glee
As you come closer beneath starry skies
Showing me coyly how dreams answer plea,

When hymn of your soul lets the music play
As intimate rhythms seductive hearts sway.

November 25, 2019
I want to fall in love with a sonnet poetry contest
Sponsor: Melani Udaeta
Placed 2nd: Your best sonnet July to December 2019
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Placed 3rd: Strand special 6 by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree November 6, 2020 at 6:41 PM Another beautiful love poem, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)

Gregory Richard Barden December 21, 2019 at 4:32 AM Sincere congratulations on your win in Sir Brian's contest, Vijay - best wishes and blessings to you and yours for a Merry Christmas! Keep up the great work, my friend! :o) Vijay Pandit December 24, 2019 at 7:45 AM Thank you Greg--much appreciate. Merry Christmas to you as well.

Brenda Chiri December 21, 2019 at 4:24 AM Congrats on your win!;) Vijay Pandit December 24, 2019 at 7:44 AM Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

John Hamilton December 16, 2019 at 5:31 PM A wonderful sonnet Vijay, I remembered how much I loved it. Congrats on a second place win! Vijay Pandit December 24, 2019 at 7:44 AM Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong December 13, 2019 at 2:28 AM This is a masterpiece Vijay! It is sure to be a top winner. Love laced thru every verse. : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit December 13, 2019 at 7:46 AM Much appreciate the vote of confidence, Connie--many thanks.

Matthew Anish November 29, 2019 at 7:24 PM Nice use of form! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Vijay Pandit November 30, 2019 at 5:05 PM Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2019 at 3:57 AM Sweetly romantic! Vijay Pandit November 29, 2019 at 7:48 AM Many thanks Kim--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2019 at 8:05 PM very romantic and I think exactly what the sponsor of that challenge was looking for! Vijay Pandit November 29, 2019 at 7:48 AM So kind of you Andrea--much appreciate your valued comments--many thanks.

Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2019 at 6:31 PM where soft winds whisper beautifully painted piece wishing you a blessed weekend Vijay Pandit November 29, 2019 at 7:47 AM Thank you for the kind remarks, Liam--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2019 at 1:28 PM - A wonderful sonnet, Vijay .... no one can avoid two falls in love with this - Best winner wishes for you, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit November 29, 2019 at 7:47 AM So true--much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos November 28, 2019 at 1:05 PM The lats two line are so sentimental my friend Vijay, they touched me to my very core! Really well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit November 29, 2019 at 7:46 AM Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks my friend.

Manmath Dalei November 27, 2019 at 9:01 PM Very amazing sonnet, Romance and love both are well depicted.Liked it................Hugs//Manmath// Vijay Pandit November 28, 2019 at 7:22 AM Much appreciate, Manmath--many thanks.

Hello There November 27, 2019 at 7:00 PM A tenderly seductive piece, Vijay. Innocent, yet mesmerizingly passionate and warm ~ alluring, as your title suggests, is the perfect term...a fav. Vijay Pandit November 28, 2019 at 7:21 AM Delighted by your feedback my friend--much appreciate HT--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Silent One November 27, 2019 at 1:19 PM One of the most romantic sonnets I have read.. sounds like perfect love with great rhyme and flow.. Vijay Pandit November 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM Thank you Silent One--much appreciate your valued comments.

Mystic Rose Rose November 26, 2019 at 6:26 PM I don't know about the rules of this contest, but I think you won it, you sonneteered it beautifully, how can a heart resist. Vijay Pandit November 27, 2019 at 7:58 AM Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Pixie--many thanks my friend.

John Hamilton November 26, 2019 at 9:53 AM No need for luck in the contest...this beauty is a winner, sweet writing, beautiful sonnet Vijay! Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:09 AM So glad to read your words of confidence, John--appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy November 26, 2019 at 8:19 AM Another lovely romantic poem set in nature, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:08 AM Thank you Janice for your visit and comments--much appreciate the kind remarks.

Joseph May November 26, 2019 at 7:13 AM Well crafted...Great write Vijay...best wishes in the contest.. Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:07 AM Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 26, 2019 at 3:28 AM The magic of falling in love presented with the collaboration of nature's beauty! A superb poetic achievement dear, Vijay! Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:06 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2019 at 11:37 PM You have mastered this form. A lovely romantic piece. Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:06 AM That is so very kind of you Richard--much appreciate--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole November 25, 2019 at 10:52 PM May the Melody of love touch your heart, for always. Leaving you in complete bliss. Your words caress softly around me. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thank you friend for your delightful feedback--much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.

Sandra Adams November 25, 2019 at 8:23 PM this is truly a beautiful sonnet my friend, perfect ending too....best wishes in the contest :) hugs Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:04 AM So glad to read your valued comments my friend--much appreciate, Sandy--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham November 25, 2019 at 4:40 PM A well written romantic sonnet Vijay. You are so good at these, good luck. Tom. Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:04 AM Always a pleasure to read your comments--many thanks, Tom.

Na Na November 25, 2019 at 4:31 PM Hi Vijay. Beautiful poem. This should do well in the contest. Best of luck. Thanks for sharing Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:03 AM Appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks Gregory.

Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 3:36 PM Wow, a beautiful sonnet Vijay! Good luck in the contest. It looks like a winner to me :) Vijay Pandit November 26, 2019 at 11:03 AM Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks. Appreciate the kind remarks.