All's Well?

All's Well?


Just
when I
think all's well
I have to think
again because if
nothing's ever the way
I think it really is and
that is when things get all mixed up,
then once again I'm left wondering
if all will ever really be all well.






This is my first attempt at Etheree.
Any input would be appreciated.
Thanks, RG.
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Austin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 3:16 PM
The mind in perpetual motion. Great use of the form, I'd say. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Robin. Love, Carol
Rhinem Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 3:33 PM
I sincerely loved the passage which you gave me today from I Cor. 2:9 Beautiful Robin!!!~"Thank You!"~ And, I hope that Your day is going wonderfully for You precious lady!!!~"I Send My Sincere Love & Warmth To You Forever, John!!!"~Bye Precious & Gifted Lady!:) Smile...., I Corinthians 15:50-58!:)
Rhinem Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 8:35 PM
Smile~And I bet "You" sang soo beautiful too, when your precious daughter was born! I could only imagine~thank you as always for the passages dear lady! And, again, "Sweet Dreams To 'You' Beautiful Robin~Love Always To You~John!":)
Rhinem Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 8:17 PM
Smile~It will always well with "You" dear!~"Hello Again Precious & Beautiful Robin!"~Getting ready to get out of here and got your comment~always such a pleasure to hear from "You!"~I sincerely hope "You" are doing well tonight dear lady!~For as I have said before~"You Have Become Very Dear Unto My Heart~And~I Love 'Your' Heart & Souls Writings!~For 'You Live Now~Deep Inside!'~"My Love To You Always, John!"~Sweet Dreams Dear Lady!"~Bye:)
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December 23, 2008 at 1:32 PM
Well, I think its going to be dear lady! I hope you are doing alright, "Beautiful & Gifted & Precious Robin!"~I am sure you are very very busy dear~yet~I hope & pray that it is all within a good way~for "You" have seemed to become so very precious unto myself! And yes, life will always hold its roller-coaster moments~just make sure your buckled in real well dear lady! and in the end, you shall enjoy the ride much more than not! "merry Christmas Beautiful Robin~My Love To You Always, John!":)
Moreno Avatar
December 11, 2008 at 2:04 AM
This is a great attempt at Etheree. Remember every great writer and painter etc. was first an amateur...Raul
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November 29, 2008 at 5:14 PM
Yes! Though life can be sometimes challenging there is always hope. I think most will relate to your words. Nice first etheree. This is a challenging form. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Happy Holidays! Karen
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November 25, 2008 at 11:47 PM
Its good to try new forms Robin.Experimentation leads to excellence.Rgds Brian
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November 25, 2008 at 9:25 PM
Perfect form and structure my dear! Trying new forms is always fun... Love, Keith (PS please take a look at 'Heaven and Hell' if you get a chance... it's my tribute to Coleridge.)
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