All's quiet now
Hello Carol,
Miss these words in an uneasiness, like birds when they go silent.
Though can't recall when..,
somewhere along the path.
Just a quiet forest looking down
at me now. Hoping
the kindness in a voice returns, the birds sing again.
~~~ Comment to Carol Sunshine Brown's poem -"Mountains Touch the Sky" ~~~
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