All's quiet now

 Hello Carol,
         Miss these words in an uneasiness, like birds when they go silent.
         Though can't recall when..,
         somewhere along the path. 
               Just a quiet forest looking down
at me now. Hoping
the kindness in a voice returns, the birds sing again. 


 ~~~  Comment to Carol Sunshine Brown's poem -"Mountains Touch the Sky"  ~~~
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January 13, 2026 at 10:32 AM
What a powerful write you have here. Hope you are OK... I have Not read, Carol Sunshine Brown's poem -"Mountains Touch the Sky." Have A Very Blessed Day Writing Away..............
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