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Alliteration Poem

Date due, destruction
Building being blownup
Father flipping furious
Tramp tries to tamper
Delays dangerously diagnosed
Short supply sandbags
Try tomorrow,Tuesday,

farewellalliteration

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John Loving Iii

January 7, 2013 at 5:02 PM

Sounds like a disaster area.

John Loving Iii

January 7, 2013 at 5:05 PM

My aliteration went from A to Z.

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2013 at 7:28 AM

Interesting Alliteration poem..Sara

Seren Roberts

January 7, 2013 at 7:32 AM

Thanks Sara was a trial run really butt it seems ok after all......Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 7, 2013 at 7:22 AM

Nice one girl xx

Seren Roberts

January 7, 2013 at 7:31 AM

Thanks Mandy. ..Seren

Honestly J.T.

January 6, 2013 at 11:07 PM

i like this poem. indeed it is alliteration - JH

Seren Roberts

January 7, 2013 at 1:56 AM

Thank you for commenting glad you liked it....Seren

Harry Horsman

January 6, 2013 at 7:40 PM

yes i know a little about alliteration, and yes i like what i read here...

Seren Roberts

January 6, 2013 at 9:13 PM

Thanks Harry, for commenting, so i did it near enough right then. That amazes me... Seren

Reggae Magnet

January 6, 2013 at 6:37 PM

Just looked it up and it fits the bill, but the notion of urgency carried in every line, nice write

Seren Roberts

January 6, 2013 at 6:54 PM

Thank you Robert for taking the time to stop amd comment.

Russell Sivey

January 6, 2013 at 10:27 AM

I don't know alliteration that well so I can't be of any help except to tell you that I enjoyed reading this great write this afternoon! I thought this poem to be tremendous and it was done very nicely! I think you did this alliteration piece wondrously here with this write, at least that's my opinion, Awesome Work my friend!!

Seren Roberts

January 6, 2013 at 6:52 PM

Thanks for commenting Russell

David Williams

January 6, 2013 at 8:31 AM

Seren pretty perfect poem...David yep Mrs. Brown hilarious, love it...

Seren Roberts

January 6, 2013 at 2:08 AM

Hello you experienced poetry soupers. I know this isn't a good alliteration, so i want you to suggest the ways of correcting it, this way i will learn. Many Thanks. Seren

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