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Alliteration Poem

Date due, destruction
Building being blownup
Father flipping furious
Tramp tries to tamper
Delays dangerously diagnosed
Short supply sandbags
Try tomorrow,Tuesday,

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2013

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John Loving Iii Date: 1/7/2013 5:02:00 PM Sounds like a disaster area. Login to Reply John Loving Iii Date: 1/7/2013 5:05:00 PM My aliteration went from A to Z.

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2013 7:28:00 AM Interesting Alliteration poem..Sara Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 7:32:00 AM Thanks Sara was a trial run really butt it seems ok after all......Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/7/2013 7:22:00 AM Nice one girl xx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 7:31:00 AM Thanks Mandy. ..Seren

Honestly J.T. Date: 1/6/2013 11:07:00 PM i like this poem. indeed it is alliteration - JH Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 1:56:00 AM Thank you for commenting glad you liked it....Seren

Harry Horsman Date: 1/6/2013 7:40:00 PM yes i know a little about alliteration, and yes i like what i read here... Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 9:13:00 PM Thanks Harry, for commenting, so i did it near enough right then. That amazes me... Seren

Reggae Magnet Date: 1/6/2013 6:37:00 PM Just looked it up and it fits the bill, but the notion of urgency carried in every line, nice write Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 6:54:00 PM Thank you Robert for taking the time to stop amd comment.

Russell Sivey Date: 1/6/2013 10:27:00 AM I don't know alliteration that well so I can't be of any help except to tell you that I enjoyed reading this great write this afternoon! I thought this poem to be tremendous and it was done very nicely! I think you did this alliteration piece wondrously here with this write, at least that's my opinion, Awesome Work my friend!! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 6:52:00 PM Thanks for commenting Russell

David Williams Date: 1/6/2013 8:31:00 AM Seren pretty perfect poem...David yep Mrs. Brown hilarious, love it... Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 2:08:00 AM Hello you experienced poetry soupers. I know this isn't a good alliteration, so i want you to suggest the ways of correcting it, this way i will learn. Many Thanks. Seren Login to Reply