Alliteration On a Therapist's Treatment

ALLITERATION
ON A THERAPIST’S TREATMENT

To physically fit my fickle frame
I found the fame of the following dame:
  From sit to somewhat surely stand
I can, when I concur with her command.

When I wearily wend my wobbly way 
Debbie certainly does say
“Prance a dance on this piddly pad, 
And be by chance enhanced
By my fond fiddly foam doodad”. 

Bring a leg back, braced by the bar,
Failed at first, then finally far.

When I try to take my tipsy turn
How to, I would literally like to learn.

Well, now I feel a right real start
By she, so surely seemingly smart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:41 AM
what a wonderful poem the alliteration makes it read like a real tongue twister - a great fun poem:-) hugs jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Sounds like bend like a pretzel ballet, lol!:)
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