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Allergic Retribution

Her sneezes didn't prevent her and John Deere from seeking vengeance... leaving a carnage of dead grass and strewn tissues in her wake 6-2-18

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/9/2018 10:12:00 PM

A fun write, Cheryl. Congrats on your podium finish.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/10/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; really appreciate the stop by!~Che :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/4/2018 11:00:00 PM

Lol! Sounds like me sometimes... Enjoyed your two lines. Congratulations on your placement.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/10/2018 7:10:00 AM

I heard that living in this part of the country is one of the worst places to live if you suffer from allergies...one day I'm going to up and move...where I dunno! Sorry you suffer from this malady too...thanks for very kind congrats and visit Susan; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2018 10:57:00 PM

Great verse, Cheryl, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/10/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Eve; really appreciate it! Hugs~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2018 8:04:00 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/4/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Anne-Lise, its been awhile since I won anything lol! Thanks again!~hugs Che :)

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 7:21:00 AM

A two line masterpiece, Cheryl... Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/4/2018 8:11:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Elaine, your comment is very flattering! Thanks again!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 6/4/2018 6:29:00 AM

Damn those allergies! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/4/2018 8:09:00 AM

I wish I could torpedo them but then I'd be caught up in all the shrapnel lol! Thanks so much for kind comment and for placing me as one of the third placers...really appreciate it!~Che :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/3/2018 10:54:00 PM

Lol! I can relate, Cheryl. I love the sneezing and sniffling humor in your verse and your title is ingenious! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 6/4/2018 8:07:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan, I had asked my allergy doctor what I'm allergic to and he basically said mother nature! I feel for you and your allergies, God Bless you even before you sneeze! Warmest wishes to you too my poetic friend~Che :)