All Yours

He came in and stood strong legged, slightly bowed,
 With baggy old pants, held up with a belt he’d found on the road.
Red faced, teeth missing, he smiled his rogue smile, 
 Enhancing the sweat oozing out from his pores
 He said, “I’m home now, at last, and Nancy, I’m all yours!”

“It’s been a long time”, I said, looking down
His smile kind of faded with the twitch of a frown.
“Now you know you’re my lass and I’ve had things to do.”
His voice pretending to be in full charge,
“It’s a time consuming task, working a barge”

I said, “Well now Jackie, I understand well,
I too have a very good tale to tell”
I lifted my bosom to give him the news,
“There’s been changes here, since off you went.
Look there in the cot, there’s the heaven-sent”

His eyes followed mine to the side of the fire
Then they widened so wide, they couldn’t go higher
And for a second I thought, “He’s gonna fall”
He peeked in, astonished, fell back on all fours,
I said, “ Welcome home Jackie, and now she’s all yours!”

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Date: 4/25/2021 11:08:00 AM
A creative/fun story/write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/25/2021 11:13:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 4/12/2021 4:20:00 PM
I went back and read your first one too. It was also good.
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for your comments i appreciate that you read my first one too. I love humorous poems and when it comes upon me i just scribble it and bingo..the lancashire lass emerges. thank you again.
Date: 4/12/2021 4:19:00 PM
Ha ha, this is great.
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:47:00 AM
Thank you richard.xx
Date: 4/12/2021 12:22:00 PM
I love stories where two lovers make up. Though I admit I like dark stories to.
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank you victor i appreciate your comments, good luck with your dark stories too.
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