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All Was Dark

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust. Simple, forgotten pattern on the floor. Gears, shuttles long ago covered with rust. Windows nailed shut and no knob for the door. Gone was the laughter that once filled the room - Mechanical sounds as patterns were changed. Ah, there was once life where now there is gloom, And spirits rose and fell as war news ranged. The war years seemed like only yesterday As I walked among detritus long dead. I still hear him,"There will be hell to pay!" While he walked and sputtered and scratched his head. My heart ached for those I had loved back then. My eyes looked 'round and I recalled that spark. I smiled, rubbed my old balding head and then The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark. 4-26-18 For contest One Nine and Sixteen for Viv Wigley

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Date: 5/3/2018 10:36:00 PM
Congrats, Larry!
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:53:00 PM
A powerful story you have told with these three lines. Great writing, Larry. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine George
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/3/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine!
Date: 5/2/2018 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations. This could have been the top winner. So many good poems inspired by these unconnected lines. Joyce
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/3/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce. I'm flattered..I'm a fan of yours!
Date: 5/2/2018 11:52:00 AM
Loved the atmosphere you portrayed in the poem, Many congratulations on your win in the contest Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/3/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 5/2/2018 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written nostalgia. Enjoyed. Can see how this is a winner!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/3/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Susan
Date: 5/2/2018 6:04:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win. Well done.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/3/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Line

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