All Was Dark

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust.
 Simple, forgotten pattern on the floor.
 Gears, shuttles long ago covered with rust.
 Windows nailed shut and no knob for the door.

 Gone was the laughter that once filled the room -
 Mechanical sounds as patterns were changed.
 Ah, there was once life where now there is gloom,
 And spirits rose and fell as war news ranged.

 The war years seemed like only yesterday
 As I walked among detritus long dead.
 I still hear him,"There will be hell to pay!"
 While he walked and sputtered and scratched his head.

 My heart ached for those I had loved back then.
 My eyes looked 'round and I recalled that spark.
 I smiled, rubbed my old balding head and then
 The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.

4-26-18
For contest One Nine and Sixteen for Viv Wigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Congrats, Larry!
George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:53 PM
A powerful story you have told with these three lines. Great writing, Larry. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine George
Bradfield Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Elaine!
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations. This could have been the top winner. So many good poems inspired by these unconnected lines. Joyce
Bradfield Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Joyce. I'm flattered..I'm a fan of yours!
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Loved the atmosphere you portrayed in the poem, Many congratulations on your win in the contest Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written nostalgia. Enjoyed. Can see how this is a winner!
Bradfield Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Susan
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 6:04 AM
Congrats on your fine win. Well done.
Bradfield Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Line
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