All Too Familiar

The teardrops fall like drops of rain, splashing against your broken heart. And subjected to years of tears; paper promises fall apart. Your fate is all too familiar; you found the soulmate of your dreams. And then, doubt somehow surges up, initiating silent screams. Reacting to fading feelings; hope morphs into pain and remorse. For on the pathway to your heart; love irrevocably changed course. Reality is awakened by the sound of a slamming door. And you're no longer able to reignite love's flame anymore. You experience depression; love's departure seems surreal. And you rely on time to help carry you beyond this ordeal.
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Date: 3/8/2018 8:58:00 AM
Great imagery. "For like a river to your heart love irrevocably changed course." and "Reality has crushed your soul with the sound of a slamming door." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 3/26/2015 6:30:00 AM
soft lines but it projects intense strong feelings and thoughts!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/26/2015 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Olive, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 12:13:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poignant write my very dear friend, Emile! It touches the heart of every reader. You write very well. To my fave.Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading my poems and your inspiring comments. Blessings to you. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/25/2015 12:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Leonora, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 11:17:00 AM
I can feel the emotion in this one..Good poetic quality..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, one needs to be familiar with the meaning of Rose Of Sharon to get the full impact..Maybe I planted a seed in a heart or two..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I'm sure you have planted seeds in many hearts with your poem. Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 10:40:00 AM
Very sad. Your writes speak to my heart on many levels, Emile....
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Jade, you bring a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 10:15:00 AM
Feels like watching a clip on the screen, but is more emotive with the fluid flow of words. Impressive, sire. A 7. Kim :)
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 10:06:00 AM
Wow Emile! So many go through moments like this, you penned it brilliantly.. hope your week has been a good one and thank you once again for the heads up ;) tc Wilma
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:57:00 AM
Thank Wilma, your visits are always a treat. Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 9:19:00 AM
The person will find the strength to pick up the pieces, no doubt. A 7 for your convincing poem. Julia, :)
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Julia, your input is always welcome. Emile.
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