All Together

He tried for what seemed like forever
To finally get it all together.
The more he tried,
The more he cried.
Now he'll be content with never.

Limerick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 9:17 AM
One is never too old or too young to get it together..Enjoyed your Limerick..Now that I am old sometimes I get it all together and can't remember what in the world I did with it..Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Well written limerick....good one Jim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ellison Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Clever, funny, great limerick! Cheers, Jack
O'Leary Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Guess you gotta compromise sometime... ;-) Terry
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