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All Things Pale

ALL THINGS PALE fire started in hell ~ beckoning the lonely girl with fierce crimson glow the matchsticks hold hands with an unrelenting grip ~ horror lights her face her red hair aflame ~ all things pale come out to stare and steal her away cemetery froths ~ moonlight strikes burning image of specters’ features douse of teardrops drain all color from her young frame ~ eternally chained 10/10/2017 Halloween Senryu Sponsor: Laura Loo
1st Place

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Date: 10/24/2017 6:53:00 AM
A great write Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 6:58:00 AM
Thanks, James!
Date: 10/24/2017 5:16:00 AM
loved this senryu chain sweet Kim! creeeeeepy :) thank you and congrats :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 6:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Luloo! Blessings to you <3 Love Kim
Date: 10/23/2017 4:35:00 PM
An excellent string of senryu, Kim. No wonder this placed so high....Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paul!
Date: 10/23/2017 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, Gary!
Date: 10/23/2017 3:19:00 PM
wow, a story chain you did! Cemetery froths.. That was such an awesome image!! Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 10/23/2017 1:30:00 PM
Great interpretation of the theme and a satisfying string of Senryu!! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 10/23/2017 12:57:00 PM
well done, love how you continued the story.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thank you G!
Date: 10/23/2017 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim, brilliant string, so well written Senryu. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Roy!
Date: 10/23/2017 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 10/23/2017 7:25:00 AM
Great string here... each works individually as well... well deserved placement... Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 7:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joseph!
Date: 10/23/2017 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations Kim :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen! xx
Date: 10/23/2017 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 7:51:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Date: 10/23/2017 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 5:38:00 AM
Thanks, Eve! :)
Date: 10/10/2017 10:02:00 AM
These are excellent Kim, good luck in the contest :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2017 10:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gary!
Date: 10/10/2017 9:54:00 AM
I like the way you wrote a story with a string of Senryu --best for a win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!

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