All the Way To Mars

And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.” ~ Friedrich Nietzsche
Dance beneath the magic moon and listen to the flute the stars will spangle brightly and then render you a mute Twirl around the trees feel the brush of wind against your skin the music of the forest has bounce it lives and breathes within Bap Bap boom boom boom bap goes the sound of the rain let it trickle down your face and take away your pain life a technicolor beat in every note pure heaven twisty water waves that flow with ascension the music of the nymphs will take you higher than the stars mayhap it will just guide you, all the way to Mars
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Faulkner Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 8:58 AM
The music of nature is so healing and uplifting, love the feeling of flying higher than the stars!
Rose  Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Michelle, will meet you on the other side of the light, will all is bright, unhurried and beautiful !
May Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 7:23 AM
I enjoyed the journey of the dance Vie, Wonderful write..
Rose  Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Dance me to the moon and back says the song, and Venue too :)
Baker Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 4:23 PM
Very fun and playful poem, Rose. I liked its rhythm. I'm following your poetry, Bill
Rose  Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Thank you Bill I appreciate your following . :)
Leffanta Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 10:34 AM
I hope not, as isn't Mars the god of war? Enjoyed! Aloha!
Rose  Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Never been to Mars but if I do I will let you know if I find war or peace over there, lol
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 4:53 AM
Much enjoyed the journey among the moon and stars, Vienna. All the way to Mars.
Rose  Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Vijay, may the Nymphs always be there in the crescent of your imagination,
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 10:40 PM
A super poem with imaginative artsy muse and style. Kudos for the rhyming and imagery as well.,! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
Rose  Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Thank you for reading S. glad you enjoyed it
Y. Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Hi Mystic, I found your write to be fun and upbeat. The tone and vibe make me feel “ happy “. I'm so glad I found this. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day-Alexis
Rose  Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 5:18 PM
Its nice to dream and enter the forest of hopes and magic dear Alexis, thanks for stopping by, sweet dreams
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