All the Way To Mars

And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.” ~ Friedrich Nietzsche
Dance beneath the magic moon and listen to the flute the stars will spangle brightly and then render you a mute Twirl around the trees feel the brush of wind against your skin the music of the forest has bounce it lives and breathes within Bap Bap boom boom boom bap goes the sound of the rain let it trickle down your face and take away your pain life a technicolor beat in every note pure heaven twisty water waves that flow with ascension the music of the nymphs will take you higher than the stars mayhap it will just guide you, all the way to Mars

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Date: 3/5/2022 8:58:00 AM
The music of nature is so healing and uplifting, love the feeling of flying higher than the stars!
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Date: 3/5/2022 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Michelle, will meet you on the other side of the light, will all is bright, unhurried and beautiful !
Date: 3/3/2022 7:23:00 AM
I enjoyed the journey of the dance Vie, Wonderful write..
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Date: 3/5/2022 2:12:00 PM
Dance me to the moon and back says the song, and Venue too :)
Date: 3/1/2022 4:23:00 PM
Very fun and playful poem, Rose. I liked its rhythm. I'm following your poetry, Bill
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Date: 3/5/2022 2:12:00 PM
Thank you Bill I appreciate your following . :)
Date: 3/1/2022 10:34:00 AM
I hope not, as isn't Mars the god of war? Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 3/5/2022 2:12:00 PM
Never been to Mars but if I do I will let you know if I find war or peace over there, lol
Date: 3/1/2022 4:53:00 AM
Much enjoyed the journey among the moon and stars, Vienna. All the way to Mars.
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Date: 3/2/2022 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Vijay, may the Nymphs always be there in the crescent of your imagination,
Date: 2/28/2022 10:40:00 PM
A super poem with imaginative artsy muse and style. Kudos for the rhyming and imagery as well.,! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 3/2/2022 2:33:00 PM
Thank you for reading S. glad you enjoyed it
Date: 2/28/2022 3:17:00 PM
Hi Mystic, I found your write to be fun and upbeat. The tone and vibe make me feel “ happy “. I'm so glad I found this. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 2/28/2022 5:18:00 PM
Its nice to dream and enter the forest of hopes and magic dear Alexis, thanks for stopping by, sweet dreams
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