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All the Nice Girls

All the Nice Girls I'd like to sail the Seven Seas With seven sailors hearty, Seven ports in seven days, And seven nights to party. My every wish would be fulfilled For me by crewmates, seven, And when friends ask me where I've been, I'll say "in seventh heaven!"

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/9/2014 4:02:00 PM

Hi Shirley! This flows pleasantly with wittiness and rhyme; a touch of fresh air :) much enjoyed. // paul

Shirley Gribble
Date: 6/14/2014 10:04:00 AM

Thanks Paul! I enjoy writing things with humour (at least I try!). All the best, Shirley x

Jiril Clemons

Date: 6/8/2014 11:41:00 AM

How poetically slick, Shirley. Brilliant in its structure of seven. Beautifully carefree, and entertaining. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.

Shirley Gribble
Date: 6/9/2014 5:22:00 AM

Thank you for that Jiril! I look forward to reading some of your poetry, first I have baking to do - expecting visitors tomorrow. Don't you just hate it when everyday things get in the way of poetry?! Shirley x

Jan Allison

Date: 5/27/2014 6:30:00 PM

Very clever and funny hugs Jan xx

Shirley Gribble
Date: 6/14/2014 10:05:00 AM

Nice to hear from you Jan, thanks for the comment. Shirley x

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 10:35:00 AM

Nice write - very witty - enjoyed it!

Shirley Gribble
Date: 5/27/2014 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Pandita, glad you liked it! XX's from Shirley