All the Little Pieces

Little details sure do speak volume

                              if we can listen

                             At first it was  the dizziness

                             just couldn't place why my eyes would go blur in seconds
                             If not that it would be the constant ache in my head

                            And there were times i would want to sleep the days off
                            just because they are starting to be boring
                     There were mornings my mouth conflicts with my stomach

                            You need to see the doctor, mama told me one morning
                             Then i paid him a visit
                             And after countless test
                             He told me...you are pregnant Victoria!

                     Just then ALL THE LITTLE PIECES started falling in place
                              The dizziness, mood swings
                               ...and now I'm carrying a baby!
                


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/24/2016 6:22:00 PM
Ahh the little pieces that make a baby! Inspiring poem. Blessings to you and your child to be.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/27/2016 9:09:00 AM
Lol!thanks Craig,for your kind words. Blessings to you too.
Date: 9/24/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations! Really an inspirational poem. Even though the reader knows where it is going the tension still builds. great write and great news:):)
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/24/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Daniel.
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