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Buried in my garden Along with my tears Memories of kisses Followed by the dark years Walk inside my grey skies Place my black robe upon your shoulders Weep for the angel who never was Wilted flowers now eaten by doves Clouds hide the searing pain Destiny mocks me, such disdain Rain drops fall on my heartless soul Happiness was lost, so very long ago

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Date: 11/17/2017 8:25:00 PM
Pain and passion so beautifully penned arthur. Your melancholic imagery is deep and haunting. A riveting write, excellent and enjoyed...
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Date: 8/28/2017 6:13:00 PM
I can almost hear Leonard Cohen singing this Arthur, (love love love Leonard) wonderful :) xomo
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Date: 8/28/2017 5:32:00 PM
oh Arthur. I love this melancholy write. Loved that imagery especially in middle verse!!
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Date: 8/28/2017 4:47:00 PM
Sad , but lovely :-)
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Date: 8/28/2017 2:35:00 PM
hi :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 4:49:00 PM
Glad to see you back Darren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 8/28/2017 11:30:00 AM
Such sadness in your pen...the blackness flows...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/28/2017 10:33:00 AM
Lamentations enriched in poetry ... A pleasure to read ... By the way, I am glad that you liked my poem ---So many days you and I did sit here ... Thank you ....
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 5:55:00 PM
You are most welcome Probir!!! :)
Date: 8/28/2017 4:26:00 AM
- A sorrow and pain ... heavy to bear, Arthur - Flowers will grow with love ... let's plant a new garden of happiness - Deeply moving poem, beautifully written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine, just a melancholy poem, I am wearing a big smile!!
Date: 8/28/2017 12:47:00 AM
Come bury it in my garden instead, and then we'll frind new happiness growing there while we sit enjoying sunshine and company, together.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 5:33:00 PM
Good idea Darren, dont worry there is a beautiful garden waiting!
Date: 8/27/2017 8:02:00 PM
wow !
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 8/27/2017 7:49:00 PM
So very sad Arthur, I was totally misled by your title. Well written....
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 4:50:00 PM
That was the idea! LOL Thanks Charlie
Date: 8/27/2017 7:36:00 PM
so heart wrenching Art... excellent....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 4:50:00 PM
Thank you poetess seren
Date: 8/27/2017 7:25:00 PM
I was searching happy but the only thing happy here might be the garden after the rain....true melancholy feeling you gave here Arthur
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Date: 8/28/2017 11:32:00 AM
I am boycotting Happy!!! LOL
Date: 8/27/2017 7:17:00 PM
This poem is so deeply reaching Arthur. Full of expression, the reader can feel it. Well written!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Heidi

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