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All the Happiness

Buried in my garden
Along with my tears
Memories of kisses
Followed by the dark years

Walk inside my grey skies
Place my black robe upon your shoulders
Weep for the angel who never was
Wilted flowers now eaten by doves

Clouds hide the searing pain
Destiny mocks me, such disdain
Rain drops fall on my heartless soul
Happiness was lost, so very long ago
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Pain and passion so beautifully penned arthur. Your melancholic imagery is deep and haunting. A riveting write, excellent and enjoyed...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 6:13 PM
I can almost hear Leonard Cohen singing this Arthur, (love love love Leonard) wonderful :) xomo
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:32 PM
oh Arthur. I love this melancholy write. Loved that imagery especially in middle verse!!
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Sad , but lovely :-)
White Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 2:35 PM
hi :)
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Glad to see you back Darren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Warrior Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Such sadness in your pen...the blackness flows...god bless...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Lamentations enriched in poetry ... A pleasure to read ... By the way, I am glad that you liked my poem ---So many days you and I did sit here ... Thank you ....
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:55 PM
You are most welcome Probir!!! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:26 AM
- A sorrow and pain ... heavy to bear, Arthur - Flowers will grow with love ... let's plant a new garden of happiness - Deeply moving poem, beautifully written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Thanks Sunshine, just a melancholy poem, I am wearing a big smile!!
White Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Come bury it in my garden instead, and then we'll frind new happiness growing there while we sit enjoying sunshine and company, together.
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Good idea Darren, dont worry there is a beautiful garden waiting!
Rainwater Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 8:02 PM
wow !
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:32 PM
Thank you so much!
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:49 PM
So very sad Arthur, I was totally misled by your title. Well written....
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:50 PM
That was the idea! LOL Thanks Charlie
Roberts Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:36 PM
so heart wrenching Art... excellent....Seren
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Thank you poetess seren
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:25 PM
I was searching happy but the only thing happy here might be the garden after the rain....true melancholy feeling you gave here Arthur
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 11:32 AM
I am boycotting Happy!!! LOL
Sands Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:17 PM
This poem is so deeply reaching Arthur. Full of expression, the reader can feel it. Well written!
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Thank you Heidi
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