All That You Won'T Remember

The sun doesn’t rise in these terrible skies
The world was in ruins once
Some kind of beautiful
Hell sat around us 
Just you and me 
This was the saddest 
The truth could be 

It was like yesterday didn’t matter
Only a banjo
A fiddler and untouched strings
Do you remember
It was some kind of beautiful

Lovely was a disastrous sport
And futbol was a feeling
Cigarettes ran from touch
Smoke came as a form of trust 
And hope remained a potion of bad luck
Do you remember when hell sat around us 

Tomorrow was unthought-of 
We were fishing for the blues
Day light in sunny nights 
A harvest moon
A picnic with apples 
Oranges and tomatoes ripe
A midseason delight 
Can you guess who’s home
We were just about human again

"metaphors, cliche's, & no one else"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 3, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Hi Jerry, Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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October 2, 2009 at 12:20 PM
Nice work, best of luck in the next round...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 6:44 PM
Just wanted to drop in and add--Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 25, 2009 at 2:24 PM
Again Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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August 29, 2009 at 8:10 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Jerry! Adeleke
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August 28, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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August 24, 2009 at 1:14 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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August 24, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Jerry,..very well writen poem,...congratulations on its feature this week ! james
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August 24, 2009 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jerry. Love, Carol
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August 23, 2009 at 5:57 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. I really like your closing line. Congratulations on having your poem feature. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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March 25, 2009 at 9:11 PM
Jerry, your work is always so thought-provoking. Oh, to step inside your head and see the world through your poet's eyes!
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