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All That Remains Of Yesterdays Wishes

Old flame memories, and game show repeats, viewed through tobacco, it's smoke fills the room, loneliness, only, stays glued to defeat, blue-bottles, can't help, but choke on the gloom. Dreams like the remote, corroded to rust, unopened, unpaid, bills sit by the door, surrendered and lost, to despair and dust, no-one levelled up, around here for sure. Each day's an ashtray, of stub filled regret, while moth eaten drapes, block out the world's light, another neat gin, will help to forget, added indifference, towards day and night. The blocked drains and sink, dirty old dishes, all that remains of, yesterday's wishes.

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Date: 8/8/2024 6:00:00 AM
Hi Martin, I loved this rather dreary but so descriptive penning of yours. You bring the reader right there into the room as Karen said.
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Martin Challender
Date: 8/8/2024 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Nancy, it is a dreary picture. Sadly it's reality for some. Thanks for reading & the feedback.
Date: 7/16/2024 2:42:00 AM
Flawless loved this! The attention to detail is incredible and the imagery captures the feeling of being trapped! This is a fav!
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Martin Challender
Date: 7/17/2024 12:53:00 AM
Thanks Karen, so glad that you enjoyed it. I was really pleased with how this turned out.
Date: 6/28/2024 6:48:00 AM
This line captures such a grey mood, 'Each day's an ashtray, of stub filled regret'. It reminds me of T.S Eliot's Lovesong of J Alfred Prufrock, 'Let us go then, you and I, When the evening is spread out against the sky., Like a patient etherized upon a table.' J
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Martin Challender
Date: 6/30/2024 11:02:00 PM
I was certainly trying to capture a grey mood there Jeanette. Many thanks for the feedback.
Date: 6/25/2024 9:39:00 AM
I love this truth in drab poem. Depression is a burden, and common to many. Thanks for this poem.
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Martin Challender
Date: 6/26/2024 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Hilda. I wanted to write something that wasn't saccharine schmaltzy, a picture from life's other side...

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