All That I Am

All that I am






With savour of liberty,
rudderless I float
in depth of time,
Unfolding treasures
and rapt of nature,
I try to construe laws.

Trusting humanity
beyond all caste and creed,
Waiting for boundaries
to say no to war,
Friends I live for stay 
tugged at my heartstrings,
my life's tune put to melody.

Emotive and impulsive,
passion my fiery blood,
Agony eats me inside
as I drown in my own tears,
Materialism doesn't fascinate,
introspection at constant stake,
I am on a velocious voyage 
that ends till eternity,
To my body and
soul's enlightenment.

Crazy bunch,
Anger crunch,
Undeciphered,
Complex puzzle,
Is all that I am !
Trusted but denied,
Honest little wise,
Take me kind,
In love blind,
Is all that I am !







Written July 31st, 2015
For contest "All that you are" by Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kimathi Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 6:57 AM
A well-written piece and congrats to your win Dr. Upma! ;-)
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:30 PM
This is so honest, candid, and bravely written! Congratulations Dr Upma on this wonderful poem!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:38 AM
Thnx Carrie! Appreciate your kind words!
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Dr Upma, congratulations on your win, In Charlotte's contest... SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Thanks for ur always kind support Skat!
Parker Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 4:50 PM
you have shown the reflection of your soul on the calm waters of life, it shines with wisdom..congratulation on your win
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Thnx Frederic! Appreciate your kind words!
Puddifoot Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 3:03 PM
this was one of the highly original entries; deep, introspective and philosophical; the first and last stanzas were particularly good - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Thnx Charlotte! Glad u liked n placed it!
Rotman Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:38 PM
This poem put a song into my head that is begging me to write it down, lol.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Thnx a lot Mary!
Gifford Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Wonderfully and beautifully written, Dr. Upma! You are all that and more. a 7 and best wishes in the contest. Thanks for visiting my poem....Darlene
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Thnx a lot Darlene!
Ellison Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 5:45 AM
I am so impressed by this absolutely beautiful write my dear Upma! Good luck in the contest... it will do well! Love, Jack xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Appreciate ur kind visit my sweetest friend Jack!Your wishes n it did place!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 5:41 AM
Profound, provoking, philosophical! Wonderful message. A seven from me, Dr. Upma!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:42 AM
Thanks a lot Demetrios my good friend! Always look forward to n appreciate ur kind visits!
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