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A struggle getting up today, often now those days be, and as I spluttered into life a thought occurred to me, it would be nice if human life ran like desktop computers, and certainly my better half has said that it would quite suit her. On days when one may find oneself in various sorts of pain just switch your life off, count to ten then switch it on again. Backup all your memories, download them from your brain and when you're in your later years upload them all again. My systems are compatible with ones I had before but I've upgraded my arthritis it's now version two-point-four.

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Date: 8/27/2016 1:18:00 AM
Adorable and also excellent. I love it! Well-written humor, too. Heck, let's go ahead and program it to tell us why we came into a room! Truly a joy to read, grin and laugh to your poem! (read it to my Tim) ... CayCay
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:22:00 PM
If two-point-four looks like that dude, pull the plug on me right now. Fun write Viv, good work...
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Date: 8/16/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, I don't quite need all that plumbing yet. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/14/2016 7:43:00 AM
Lol, it would be nice if we could all just age gracefully without the aches and pains Viv! Funny write!:)
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Date: 8/16/2016 12:25:00 AM
As Indiana Jones once said " It's not the age, it's the mileage". Thanks for dropping by, Cheryl. Viv x
Date: 8/14/2016 5:14:00 AM
Ha ha ... wonderful ...
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