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All Or Nothing

I’m awesome and magnificent, bragged Universe one day, my galaxies have black holes and beware my gamma ray. No force can match my power, so with me you must agree. "Oh hush" said Spirit quietly. "You’re nothing without me."

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2013 10:00:00 AM

Hello Paul, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = Linda

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2013 1:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem of the week... Have a nice day Paul,............SKAT

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:55:00 PM

Paul, interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:46:00 PM

wow Paul, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 5:06:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Paul

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/17/2013 11:04:00 PM

Thanks much for this good poem turning science into a poem, I love the reminder from spirit. I think you capture a somewhat arrogant person, but I think you could go a little deeper. However, the contest rules require the personification form. This is still good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks much for entering my contest.

Skat A

Date: 10/17/2013 7:56:00 PM

Hi Paul Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2013 3:44:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Paul ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/16/2013 10:33:00 PM

Welcome to the soup. Love this witty poem of yours.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2013 8:22:00 PM

wow, now that's really tellin em....Paul, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@