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All On a Summers Eve

The screen door droops lazily, slightly ajar Crickets croon lullabies, heard from afar Kid’s sticky faces, betray ice-cream bars All on a summers eve Legs peel off chairs, from the sticky, wet heat Rocking chairs sway, creaking out restless beats Mosquitoes, they feast upon my grass-stained feet All on a summers eve Young lovers strip down, kissing perchance to swim As jealous moon watches, and sunset grows dim The sand dunes heat up, begging for skin on skin All on a summers eve Bold daisies flirt, nodding their modest heads, Ivory faced roses blush, burning them red Tiny seeds toss, and then shoot from their beds All on a summers eve Butterflies tease, as they flit-flutter by Somewhere a windowsill holds fresh baked pie Magic is born within jars of fireflies All on a summers eve Wild, woodland faeries dance in faerie rings Children will grin, picking flowers to bring, to Their surprised mothers, whose thankful hearts sing All on a summers eve Fishes gaze warily at worm-hooked poles Marshmallows roast above fiery coals Keen mother horses watch boisterous foals All on a summers eve Impatient winds blow, making love to the trees Zephyrs entice; then enrage the calm seas While lilies and hyacinths bewitch the breeze All on a summers eve Love will be found, and remembered, and made Peace is a book, an old tree and its shade Summer to me, tastes like cold lemonade All on a summers eve So, come with ye, summer; be gone snow and sleet! I long to feel grass on the soles of my feet And jump in the river as suns rays retreat All on a summers eve Shared 2nd place winner in Karen Neary's Summer Enchantment Rhymed poetry contest. Thank you!!!

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Date: 5/14/2009 1:32:00 PM
Straight to my favs, no shadow of a doubt, i was smiling fom the first line and grinning widely at the end. This is one of the best rhymes i have read, its just Brilliant, James,xx
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Date: 3/8/2009 10:44:00 AM
As always a beautiful write - Congratulations on being featured this last week, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/7/2009 1:28:00 AM
Hi Kristin, You did it again! Congratulations. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 3/6/2009 8:04:00 PM
Well Kristin I can see why you won second place what a excellent poem and story, such vivid imagery throughout the whole piece! Congratulations on a wonderful poem featured! I love it!!!! Love Laura :)
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:03:00 AM
HOw did I miss this one. SUPER.....all the smells, colors. all the senses touched with memory. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/3/2009 12:46:00 PM
Congrats Kristin on "All on a Summer's Eve" being featured. Great descriptive write. Vince
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Date: 3/2/2009 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured this week! Love, robin
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Date: 3/2/2009 3:12:00 PM
I was sure I had commented some time ago on this wonderful write but now I don't see when ... oh well, its still just wonderful and a well-deserved winner in the contest as well as a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Kristin. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2009 6:34:00 AM
I remember this well. Warmest congrats Kristin on a most beautiful featured write. Wonderful to read it again. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/1/2009 11:50:00 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Kristin Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/1/2009 5:43:00 PM
Lovely poem, Kristin...I'm so glad it is being featured this week, so that I had a 2nd chance to catch it. A welcome poem, on a cold winter day...hearing about summer puts a smile on my face! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/1/2009 5:17:00 PM
A second place finish and now a featured poem! Congratulations Kristin. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 2/17/2009 11:45:00 AM
Kristin, I am glad I found this beautiful treasure. Lovely, enchanting, an excellent piece of poetry! Love, Robin
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