All of Me, Quietly

All of me,
Folded into one breath - a love so vast!
The stars mesmerized your shape,
Through my eyes, bright as belief itself.
I just know, he is in everything!

The celestial ether above me, above us,
It was dawn kissed as if it was a lover's sigh across heaven!
And a weightless wonder stirred within me - 
That whimsical breath dancing along in the invisible threads of a love so chaste!

"Is it love or just a fancy?" 
They asked and I could only smile,
For it would claim a lifetime to whisper,
"I love him - every fragment of me, every imperfection of him, every quiet corner where only love can dwell."
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Bordner Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 12:52 PM
I unfold your breath with nimble need, like a light beam illuminating spirited steam, bewitched by a beauty only spoken of in ancient poetry, I'm taken to an inflection point that can only be pronounced in paranormal pulse, a threshold trespassed for the knowledge of your intense touch, a body in deep black danger moves in slow flesh, a quiet kiss is thought, liberty being locked in a gravity of love pressure...J.A.B.
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December 27, 2025 at 11:52 AM
More shall be yours Poetess :)...J.A.B.
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December 26, 2025 at 9:04 PM
This is just truly insanely perfect!!! Cheers for more wonders!!
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