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On an early April afternoon, nearly three decades ago I waited to meet my firstborn, but time moved so slow Upon her delivery I heard the lusty sound of her cries It was in that moment, happy tears fell from my eyes Perfect in every way; of course I counted her fingers and toes What's a girl to do if she doesn't have the right number of those A head full of dark ebony hair, rested upon the lass like a crown In my first glimpse of her she'd traded crying for furrowed frown A babe who never caused a stir. Were all babies that good? When my next was born, five years later, then I understood Emphatically not! No two children are ever quite the same Each has their own personality that only he or she can claim My little daughter thought she was also his doting mother Teaching all the things she had learned to her baby brother How quickly they grew between first steps and off to school Each gave a scare with choking; swimming lessons at the pool Mother's who brag on their children can be quite the bore But both graduated from high school and college with honors galore My daughter became a graphic designer, a manager for Triple A Florida is home to her family. Far from me, but a plane ride away She presented me with my only grandchild, a precious little boy Eighteen months of loving him has been eighteen months of joy My son will never leave New Orleans. His roots here run deep He likes hanging with his Mom, and gives me hugs when I weep Communications is his field of work and he's doing very well Recently married, so his baby is a French Bulldog named Belle Both took their time finding great jobs and marriage mates, how smart My two children became four, then five. My grandson stole my heart My happiness has grown through the years, watching them all thrive I'm so proud to be their mother, and I humbly thank God for all five sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss February 10, 2016 My Lovely Children Contest by Laura Loo

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Date: 2/27/2016 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading.
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Date: 2/27/2016 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 2/27/2016 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations Lin on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you very kindly, Hansteven.
Date: 2/27/2016 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations for your blessings..,worth more than this win.
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. You're so right...my blessings of such a family is what matters ;)
Date: 2/26/2016 4:32:00 PM
lovely poem in reminiscing in the past it is wonderful that they show so much love especially that little baby boy Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win, Lin!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:53:00 PM
Thank you for such sweet comments, Eve. Hugs back to you.
Date: 2/26/2016 2:42:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, and I'm returning the congrats and the hugs.
Date: 2/26/2016 2:33:00 PM
What a great story you tell. They were as blessed as you to have such a loving and beautiful mother. Congratulations on your winning poem. Peace to you dear Peaches:)
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thank you on both counts, Danny. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 2/26/2016 2:30:00 PM
God knew what he was doing when he gave us children and grand-children. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:51:00 PM
Yes, He did, Joyce, and thank you very much.
Date: 2/26/2016 12:14:00 PM
Lin, I really enjoyed reading an insight of a special part of your life..I loved it.Congrats on your top placement and thank you for your entry :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/26/2016 1:19:00 PM
You have such a kind heart, Luloo. Thank you.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:29:00 AM
i like how your children multiplied, but i hope belle isn't part, or else you're gonna get a dozen grandchilds soon, lol, you've got lovely children, but i won't give them any blame, you're one lovely mother too, lovely write there, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you for very sweet comments, Sage. I've no worries over Belle increasing the size of our family...the vet took care of that. ;)
Date: 2/10/2016 8:42:00 PM
very good lin. do you live in New Orleans? I was there once with my boyfriend.Loved it a lot KB
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:56:00 AM
Hi, Katie. Yes, I do live in New Orleans, and thanks for your nice comment.
Date: 2/10/2016 2:10:00 PM
What a lovely dedication to motherhood Lin - we have every right to be so so proud of our children - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks for your well wishes, Jan. You know I appreciate your visits.

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