All Made Up

I looked in the mirror, Oh what a sight
lucky for me it was Halloween night
again I checked my make up was right
no point going out if I wasn't a fright
glad it was dark wouldn't go in the light
when the kids see me it'll be me they invite
to walk down the road bunched all quite tight
collecting some sweets, share them? I might
got a day off tomorrow so may fly my kite...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 11:54 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your win, Stuart , enjoyed reading your great monorhyme ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Cute poem, Stuart. Make up does wonders. Congrats on your win.
Y. Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Hi Stuart, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. PS, I just noticed that your name Stuart Chandler the same as Adam's twin brother on All My Children. Cool:-) Alexis
O. Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:59 AM
This is a humorous poem about a night on Halloween. It was told in a first person perspective to make it easier to understand. You did a good job with using figure of speeches.
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