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All Made Up

I looked in the mirror, Oh what a sight lucky for me it was Halloween night again I checked my make up was right no point going out if I wasn't a fright glad it was dark wouldn't go in the light when the kids see me it'll be me they invite to walk down the road bunched all quite tight collecting some sweets, share them? I might got a day off tomorrow so may fly my kite...

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/10/2018 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Stuart , enjoyed reading your great monorhyme ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/5/2018 8:20:00 PM

Cute poem, Stuart. Make up does wonders. Congrats on your win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/5/2018 7:17:00 PM

Hi Stuart, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. PS, I just noticed that your name Stuart Chandler the same as Adam's twin brother on All My Children. Cool:-) Alexis

Ibidun O.

Date: 1/2/2018 10:59:00 AM

This is a humorous poem about a night on Halloween. It was told in a first person perspective to make it easier to understand. You did a good job with using figure of speeches.