All Is Well

It's four am and all is well as we begin our walk.
The dogs cavorting merrily as we commune and talk.
I tell Him of the beauty that surrounds me every day.
The joy that comes from knowing Him plain words cannot convey.

He has given me so much that oft I take for granted.
Good health, good food and freedom that through life goes unsupplanted.
I eat what I want to eat, as much as I can hold.
If I feel some needs be said, I say it and I'm bold.

I do not fear reprisal in any form or shape;
And if by chance it happened, why I would stand agape.
My clothes are not the very best as is most of my stuff.
I need not hang my head in shame, I have more than enough.

I go where I want to go, do what I want to do,
And if I do not get my way, then I start feeling blue.
We're spoiled rotten in this land, God has blessed us greatly.
The least of our amenities, to others seem quite stately.
                                                                                
So thank You God for what You`ve done.
Words just cannot say,
How grand to have You in my life.
Come in My Lord, please stay.

                                       


For Gut Me O Contest by Nikko Palmario  -  Aug. 25,2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/8/2011 9:01:00 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Judy. Love, Carol
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/8/2011 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so m juch Carol Have a great day. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/28/2011 9:15:00 PM
What a perfect way to start the day;. Giving thanks with best friends along for the ride. Your gifts are wonderful to read Judy!
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Date: 8/26/2011 9:49:00 PM
this is so true, Judy. VERY well said and I agree wholeheartedly. I hope I am not right about this, but I am thinking this is supposed to be a free verse contest, but yours rhymes. Anyway, I wish you well. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2011 4:22:00 PM
Thanks my friend. I know it's supposed to be free verse but it came out o.k. Not really worried about it. (smile) Thanks bunches, God Bless, JB
Date: 8/26/2011 7:05:00 PM
luv that line about how spoiled we are here Judy and if we don't get something it is usually for our own good as He sees fit to give ... luv the ending .. such a terrific write ..good luck in the contest.. communing with God all day ..every day.. makes life a ball.. His Way..my friend..
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Date: 8/26/2011 7:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda. Can'ty understand why that last stanza won't pull aay from the one above it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/26/2011 5:15:00 PM
any place, any time s good as any to commune with Him.. abreath alone is a long talk.. insiring me no end, judy.. lovely! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/26/2011 1:54:00 PM
very very lovely enjoyable write, Judy. read mine just posted,
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Date: 8/26/2011 8:41:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Sara. god Bless, JB
Date: 8/26/2011 3:40:00 AM
Enjoyed your words today Judy..
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/26/2011 10:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Joe. Don't kno why the last to stanzas keep running together. They don't on my poem list. God Bles, JB
Date: 8/25/2011 11:43:00 PM
This is a great write! I love how you integrated "he" into everything and let us try to figure out who "he" is. Then in the forth stanza you finally tell us. Then it all makes sense! I enjoyed this immensely! Thank you for letting us read this poem and good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:43:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/25/2011 11:39:00 PM
oh my! Nikko, is a lot of fun... you pulled this poem off perfect. I tried one early and I got lost. I don't think mine would even hit with Nikko, however i do feel the high intensity here. as you said... ALL IS WELL~ thanks for sharing once again,..p.d.
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