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All in a Summer's Day

sun is ascending birds in the trees and light breeze. . . nature is singing sun at its zenith in fields of glistening gold. . nature breathes silence sun has descended shadows blanket the city. . . wind whispers good night June 27, 2020 Posted only for Brian Strand's Strand Completely New Poetry (1) Any Form Any Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/10/2020 2:42:00 PM
love these, especially the third
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:43:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:13:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I really like this one a lot. You so eloquently describe the way I feel in the course of my day. I especially like the last stanza "sun has descended . . . shadows blanket the city . . . wind whispers good night." How evocative. Takes me back to my city life days. Luv, Bryan
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Date: 6/28/2020 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2020 10:53:00 AM
You did fabulous with these haiku's with serenity in every word. congrats on your win.WDU
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Date: 6/28/2020 2:25:00 AM
WOW, your love for the sun really comes out in this haiku trio. Love the three stages and how you filled them with nature's interaction with the sun. Hope it's a winner!
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Date: 6/27/2020 6:04:00 PM
Gorgeous haiku Andrea.
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Date: 6/27/2020 5:55:00 PM
Love your images of a summers day Andrea Good luck in the contest Tom
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