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All In a Day

Once more, the day fades, into the dusky hues of twilight. Purple and gray in various shades, transforms the day, into night. I sit within the shadows, deepening as the night grows still. The last of light follows, leaving space for darkness to fill. I reflect upon the events of the day. Hours of time, that have passed by. In my mind, I can edit and replay, the reality, I conveniently deny. This day just beginning, will soon be gone. Perhaps upon wings, time does fly. I reach out, but, I can't hold on. Time, lost forever, in a neverending sky

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Date: 2/5/2022 6:28:00 AM
Very well written anaylyzation of time and how it passes by and moves on, with thoughts about the day. :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/6/2022 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I worry about becoming too analytical, a fine line.
Date: 2/4/2022 9:45:00 AM
Sandra, this is such a powerful and moving piece. When we pause to assess the day, how quickly time goes by, we realize the cycle "in the neverending sky"...very beautiful. :) Paulette
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/6/2022 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paulette for your lovely comment. I do appreciate your input.

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