All In a Day

shaped like a boat,
          a sock peeked out,
        down under the rim.
      a baby bootie,
    a boot camp scootie,
  befuddled the face,
bright red,
  of a pale blond —
    a mother on the side.
      could have been undies
        lining the sailor cap!
waterlogged laughter.
     sea of despair.

however... i showed her up,
      dereliction of my polished shoes.
    barely an adult,
  sneakering to hide
in the head,
  luckily placed as a guest
    in the gatehouse
      and not out on my rear guard
        or thrown in the brigg
for my lack of attention to detail.

the blond carries her family in a seabag
      — not allowed —
can’t find the other sock.

9/3/2020
All In A Day Poetry Contest
Sponsor - William Kekaula

scootie means child that is between the stages of crawling and walking. Here I’m using it as a baby’s sock.

sneakering is a play on words as I had absentmindedly put on my sneakers
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Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 5:26 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Kim :) - Have a great day, enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 9:20 PM
I admire your choice metaphors, Kim, refreshing insights that you have shared throughout! A delightful submission, congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Thank you, William! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:44 AM
"the blond carries her family in a seabag" this is so TRUE! Wow! Love this one. A FAVE.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:19 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Dutta Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 8:47 PM
VERY NICE.All the best
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 4:23 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Ashford Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Great interplay of words Kim rich in imagery. Well done! e
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, Eric!
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 6:21 AM
- Great told, Kim ... (one day of really?) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
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