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All In a Day

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All alone By the side of the Creek Dreaming and Even Feeling the Gusts of wind Have Interfered with my Joyful repose Keeping Little Musings Notes to myself On a Parchment, inked by my Quill pen Resting Smiling as Sundown Takes light from the sky Until darkness blankets the creek Very slowly a storm approaches Waiting until St. Francis Xavier sends a Young owl to guide me home where ZZZs of sleep fill the night

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/17/2020 11:54:00 AM

Back to say congrats, Carolyn, love your serene day in nature!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/17/2020 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful day you had in this wonderful poem and picture. Wish I was by your water creek. Enjoy your win............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/17/2020 5:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Carolyn :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/16/2020 9:05:00 PM

A harmonious start till its end of distinguishable attributes that courses, Carolyn, I found myself tethered to an unspeakable joy! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/6/2020 9:35:00 AM

A lovely telling of this tale along with good imagery and insightful thought too Carolyn, well done indeed! Blessings always,Gordon

Paul Callus

Date: 9/5/2020 2:08:00 AM

Excellent...smooth flowing and ending in such a creative way, Carolyn. In my eyes a sure winner! Hugs // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2020 5:37:00 PM

amazing write, carolyn...the saint was an angel too!..huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2020 1:57:00 PM

wow, you did this in such an awesome way, CArolyn. I think it's gonna be a top winner!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/2/2020 1:56:00 PM

Wish I had been there with you, Carolyn. I love to wade creeks. A very pleasant read, My kind of poem.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/3/2020 2:31:00 PM

Nice to see you here, Daniel! Thanks for reading.

Silent One

Date: 9/2/2020 1:10:00 PM

You did this ABC very well, I like how you told a story through this... Flows very well.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/3/2020 2:40:00 PM

Thanks for reading, my friend.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/2/2020 12:10:00 PM

Clever girl! Winner for sure! Aloha! Rico

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/2/2020 8:57:00 AM

Wonderful imagery with your A B C dear friend - each line matters - you give a substantial relevant explanation to each letter of the alphabet Well penned Carolyn. Blessings and ugs, Jennifer

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/2/2020 5:12:00 AM

Amazing how you did this seamlessly in ABC---feels so serene and peaceful from start to end. All the best Carolyn.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2020 1:35:00 AM

- Excellent, Carolyn ... great work ... best wishes in the contest ... a winner I'm sure - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2020 8:47:00 PM

Oh indeed this is a peach of poetry, so cleverly written..love it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/1/2020 7:43:00 PM

This is such a creative approach to the contest. You penned it so seamlessly, Carolyn. Here's to a winner! Days and Ways, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/1/2020 6:53:00 PM

The story of a day, skillfully woven together - I liked the 'musings/notes to myself' the best! Good luck in the contest!

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 9/1/2020 5:19:00 PM

Another masterpiece from your very talented quill, Carolyn. I see another top winner here - good luck in the contest! - Bob

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/1/2020 4:13:00 PM

I can imagine you writing this one...simple and sweet...peaceful to say the least...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/1/2020 4:06:00 PM

At one with nature, there is nothing better than that to lift your spirits, Tom