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All In a Day

All alone
By the side of the
Creek
Dreaming and
Even
Feeling the
Gusts of wind
Have
Interfered with my
Joyful repose
Keeping
Little
Musings
Notes to myself
On a
Parchment, inked by my
Quill pen
Resting
Smiling as Sundown
Takes light from the sky
Until darkness blankets the creek
Very slowly a storm approaches
Waiting until St. Francis
Xavier sends a 
Young owl to guide me home where
ZZZs of sleep fill the night 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/17/2020 11:54:00 AM
Back to say congrats, Carolyn, love your serene day in nature!
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful day you had in this wonderful poem and picture. Wish I was by your water creek. Enjoy your win............
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Carolyn :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2020 9:05:00 PM
A harmonious start till its end of distinguishable attributes that courses, Carolyn, I found myself tethered to an unspeakable joy! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Date: 9/6/2020 9:35:00 AM
A lovely telling of this tale along with good imagery and insightful thought too Carolyn, well done indeed! Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 9/5/2020 2:08:00 AM
Excellent...smooth flowing and ending in such a creative way, Carolyn. In my eyes a sure winner! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:37:00 PM
amazing write, carolyn...the saint was an angel too!..huggs
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Date: 9/4/2020 1:57:00 PM
wow, you did this in such an awesome way, CArolyn. I think it's gonna be a top winner!!
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Date: 9/2/2020 1:56:00 PM
Wish I had been there with you, Carolyn. I love to wade creeks. A very pleasant read, My kind of poem.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/3/2020 2:31:00 PM
Nice to see you here, Daniel! Thanks for reading.
Date: 9/2/2020 1:10:00 PM
You did this ABC very well, I like how you told a story through this... Flows very well.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/3/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thanks for reading, my friend.
Date: 9/2/2020 12:10:00 PM
Clever girl! Winner for sure! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/2/2020 8:57:00 AM
Wonderful imagery with your A B C dear friend - each line matters - you give a substantial relevant explanation to each letter of the alphabet Well penned Carolyn. Blessings and ugs, Jennifer
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Date: 9/2/2020 5:12:00 AM
Amazing how you did this seamlessly in ABC---feels so serene and peaceful from start to end. All the best Carolyn.
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Date: 9/2/2020 1:35:00 AM
- Excellent, Carolyn ... great work ... best wishes in the contest ... a winner I'm sure - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/1/2020 8:47:00 PM
Oh indeed this is a peach of poetry, so cleverly written..love it.
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Date: 9/1/2020 7:43:00 PM
This is such a creative approach to the contest. You penned it so seamlessly, Carolyn. Here's to a winner! Days and Ways, Gershon
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Date: 9/1/2020 6:53:00 PM
The story of a day, skillfully woven together - I liked the 'musings/notes to myself' the best! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:19:00 PM
Another masterpiece from your very talented quill, Carolyn. I see another top winner here - good luck in the contest! - Bob
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Date: 9/1/2020 4:13:00 PM
I can imagine you writing this one...simple and sweet...peaceful to say the least...
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Date: 9/1/2020 4:06:00 PM
At one with nature, there is nothing better than that to lift your spirits, Tom
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