All I Can Say (Septet)
Forgive me
I was a real fool
I never meant to hurt you
My purpose was to make things better
In haste, though, I made things worse
Please give me a chance
I’m sorry
Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed
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