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All I Can Do

If I could climb inside your heart I would seal all the cracks that let love spill away.. I would breathe in to your soul with words of romance and sweet times for all your days.. I would crawl into your dreams and show a picture show of love and warmth that gleams.. But I'm just a man who could only offer a paper full of words and kind thoughts.. A shoulder to catch a tear or two and maybe some comfort of love I was taught.. Whether across the hall or a country away.. close your eyes and feel my words any day..

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/6/2011 12:42:00 AM

Yet another very romantic poem!Enjoyed-kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/5/2011 1:03:00 AM

By offering a shoulder and kind words, you are already sealing "the cracks that let love spill away, Michael. She is lucky to have you. I love this special poem and it is a new favorite for me because this is all anyone woman could ask in a partner. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2011 9:51:00 PM

wee! now words are the best thing in life.. imagine that all it takes is words to creat a feeling.. (( any kind of feeling)) mad ~sad~happy~ even hateful and loving feeling.. what ever TURNS a feeling on~~and we all know that nothing in this world is real.. if a feeling is not involved... lol.. by the way I love Lindas comment.. she is really something... i super love this poem.. closed eyes can take one in to alot of heap imagination... enjoyed,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/4/2011 4:02:00 PM

Nice perception suggested to close the eyes and feel the words, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 3:36:00 PM

Well now don't get me started on handbags.. luv.. they all match my shoes.. haha.. so there is an invasion of "Sweetheart" and Ron is happy he does not have to carry one..luv..haha..Roseanna is my kinda woman luv..she has style... just look at who she married..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/4/2011 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, I wrote this for someone special that I hoped I helped see love differently.. love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 3:26:00 PM

Michael.. I changed some of my wording in my contest entry for the shoes... think it reads a little better now... Ron only has boots and one pair of dress shoes for client meetings... he is a boot guy.. my shoes, boots, flops, slippers, sneakers, etc.. are all over my bedroom floor cause the closets are full of old shoes..haha..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 3:05:00 PM

I am so luving this one my White Knight.. amazing picture painted with luv and thoughtful sentiment extending such tender luv.. and devotion ... special write Michael.. what do u think about Andy Pettit retiring luv? he is one of my favorites on the Yankees ..now what will they do? u also enjoy your Super Bowl Sunday .. we are having a family feast here at the ranchero luv.. enjoy.. and may the best team win..

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/4/2011 3:00:00 PM

Hey Micheal loved this one and thanks for the sweet comment.~Teresa~

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 2:59:00 PM

This is well written and very descriptive while being very easy to read with simple words.