Notes About The Poem

All I Ask

You don't have to 
set a trap 
for my heart, dear. 
You don't have to
cry or plead for it.
You don't have to
compete 
against another
to stake your claim,
for my heart has but
ONE room.
It could be yours,
and only yours 
to occupy!
You don't have to
chase after it, my lovely.
I'll give you
my heart.
I'll give it 
to you
willingly,
if you 
give me yours.
That is all I ask.


STRAND PICK E, any theme, any form (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand 
Date submitted: 05/24/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/26/2020 11:02:00 PM
Such a beautiful extension and expression of love that really asks nothing Edward. Congratulations Edward.
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/26/2020 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Date: 4/24/2020 6:39:00 PM
to exchange hearts with equal amounts of love is all one could wish for... beautifully penned :) hugs
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2020 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2020 12:44:00 PM
One word: Wonderful!!! :) xomo
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2020 1:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen:-)
Date: 4/24/2020 12:18:00 PM
Just read four of your poems Edward, your pens ablaze, welcome back from the block. Tom
Login to Reply
Ibeh Avatar
Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2020 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom:-) Let's see how long it lasts, lol
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter