All Hallow's Eve Night

All Hallow's Eve is quite an eery night to be out past dark
I wouldn't be caught dead taking a walk through the park
So I stayed inside my house to keep myself safe from harm
When I heard the strangest sound, I shuddered with alarm

Coming from the cellar, my eyes were focused on the door
My heart skipped a beat, a deep voice bellowed "nevermore"
Slowly the knob turned, suddenly I couldn't catch my breath
Thoughts ran wild in my mind, was this to end in my death

Fearful of demise, I closed my eyes, then covered my head
Unable to believe my ears when a most familiar voice said
"Pam!  Those damn raccoons were down in the cellar again!"
I thought for a moment there I'd died and gone to heaven

Peering through these fear stricken fingers, who did I see
None other than my husband and he was laughing at me
He then peeled me off the floor, and he held me oh so tight
That's my story and I'm stickin' to it, Happy Halloween night!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/1/2015 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Adele!
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:04:00 AM
Adele, congratulations. SKAT
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Adele Kaye
Date: 11/1/2015 11:10:00 AM
Thanks, SKAT! Have a wonderful day! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)
Date: 11/1/2015 8:13:00 AM
This one made me smile! Congratulations.
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Adele Kaye
Date: 11/1/2015 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much! Your comment made me smile!
Date: 11/1/2015 12:34:00 AM
Cute story Adele.
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Adele Kaye
Date: 11/1/2015 5:17:00 AM
Thank you for your time and comment, James! Pam aka Adele Kaye :)
Date: 10/12/2015 2:54:00 PM
- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Adele :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Adele Kaye
Date: 10/12/2015 3:46:00 PM
Thank you for the kind welcome and comment on my Halloween poem, Anne-Lise! I look forward to reading some of your poetry soon! Have a nice day! My pen name is Adele Kaye, my friends called me Pam! :)
Date: 10/9/2015 6:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this Pam. This is indeed great and a write worthy of praise. Excellent. I wellcome you with a big and delightful grin. Hope to see you drop at my page soon....love always dear poet.............A.M.
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Adele Kaye
Date: 10/9/2015 7:56:00 AM
Hello A.M.! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem and for the wonderful welcome to Poetry Soup! I am working on a poem at the moment but will visit your page ASAP! Thanks for the invitation! Have a wonderful day! Pam :)
Date: 10/8/2015 7:20:00 PM
Hi Adele, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Adele Kaye
Date: 10/9/2015 1:21:00 AM
* a good day, in fact, lol...I think you can tell I haven't figured out how to do things right yet!
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Adele Kaye
Date: 10/9/2015 1:08:00 AM
Hi Linda! Thanks for the warm welcome! I look forward to being a worthy member of Poetry Soup! Time will tell, guess! Take care and have at day! BTW you have quite the mighty member name! Though my pen name is Adele Kaye, my friends know me as Pam! Bye!
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Adele Kaye
Date: 10/9/2015 12:59:00 AM
Hi Linda...thank you so much for the warm welcome. BTW, you have quite an intimidating member name! I look forward to becoming a worthy member of Poetry Soup! Time will tell! Thanks again, Oh and my member name is Adele Kaye but my real name is Pam! Bye!
Date: 10/8/2015 4:29:00 PM
Adele, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Adele Kaye
Date: 10/8/2015 6:14:00 PM
Hi SKAT...thank you for the welcome message! A little about me, I'm 67 years old, I've been writing poetry for about 17 years, a late bloomer! I write all kinds of poetry, pretty much mostly Rhyme but when I'm bored I'll venture out and try different forms. I am divorced, currently living with a fellow I met online 16 years ago! I'm a mother, grandmother and great grandmother! My pen name is Adele Kaye but my real name is Pam! Nice to meet you!
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