JB Jacob or Koos Van Rensburg Poet Concrete

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John Michaels November 10, 2018 at 12:09 PM Perfectly encapsulates it!! Nicely done! Regards, John.

Andrew Battaglino November 2, 2018 at 4:38 PM very clever. Congrats

DM Babbit November 2, 2018 at 2:51 PM Nicely done.

Lycia Harding October 23, 2018 at 12:20 PM Whoah!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2018 at 6:31 PM that was really profound!!! Wow. Congrats.

Line Gauthier September 21, 2018 at 2:30 PM Strong message, JB. Congrats on your top placement.

Jan Allison September 21, 2018 at 3:26 AM many congrats JB:-) hugs Jan x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 20, 2018 at 9:44 AM JB, you snuck in an old poem, but I can't be dissapointed. I intend to write a blog on why I placed a one word poem in my contest, I hope you check it out. I briefly visited your page and plan to return. You have not posted in a long time, I do hope you are writing still, I would be very interested to read where you're at now on your poetic journey. Thank you and congratulations for your win in my contest! Write on dude. xomo! JB Jacob or Koos Van Rensburg September 25, 2018 at 10:22 AM My lack of postings in the last few years have been because I was concentrating on my Afrikaans writing (I am a South African student and creative writing is my major). Due to the political situation in my country (with Afrikaans being labeled as a "White" language and therefore being condemned and removed from universities and schools), I felt I had a duty to do so. I do plan on working on and posting all the material Ive had lying around during this hiatus and would also be very interested in reading your blog.

Dean Wood September 20, 2018 at 9:06 AM A powerful message here in concrete for all to see. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong September 19, 2018 at 10:30 PM Very creative with a clear message that too many worship. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )

Jesse Rowe September 19, 2018 at 10:06 PM The almighty dollar. You communicate much with this evocative take on concrete poetry. Congratulations on your top win!