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All For Greed

a quick sideways glance shoplifting a speck of gold ~ the weight of a man Submitted on July 9, 2019 for contest SENRYU ABOUT GREED, LUST OR LOSS sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN

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Date: 7/14/2019 1:57:00 PM
very interesting one how you played on the phrase. Can't wait to see who wins this one. I find the theme difficult to do with just those three very short lines.
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Date: 7/14/2019 2:36:00 PM
Yes, tricky. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea. I'm sure you will come up with something brilliant.
Date: 7/12/2019 10:06:00 AM
metaphoric masterpiece, my friend.
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Date: 7/12/2019 2:26:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 7/12/2019 2:08:00 AM
Like it a lot!
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Date: 7/12/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/11/2019 5:50:00 AM
Cute one. Enjoyed reading it. I wonder how much a speck of gold would be worth today? Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/11/2019 6:37:00 AM
It's worth the reputation and dignity of a greedy man, Sara.
Date: 7/9/2019 9:39:00 PM
Oh that's good! You have my vote ;) Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 7/9/2019 9:46:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and vote of confidence, Maureen.

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