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Merse
Created by Malabika Ray Choudhury, this is a two stanza short descriptive 12 line poem, with the following syllable counts 1-2-3-4-5-6 and 6-5-4-3-2-1.

From scented wildflowers to falling snow or a twinkling star, Nature's ubiquitous. She's an interactive all-encompassing omnipresence, the tactile face of God. (Merse) 8/16/2021 Merse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2021 11:11:00 AM

Oh Emile, I love this - "ubiquitous," "tactile," "interactive" - the master wordsmith of creativity in action weaving new and less used words into a framework of poetic expression and ultimate beauty. And your last line is one for the ages - "tactile face of God!" Defiitely a fav and a work of art! Congratulations for you win. Blessings for you dear friend!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2021 9:43:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2021 12:18:00 AM

I'm pleased to have found your poem on the winners' list, Emile; it has a pleasing and calming aura surrounding it. Congratulations, my friend. Regards // paul

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2021 7:07:00 AM

Thanks, Paul, I appreciate your comments, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2021 7:47:00 PM

Indeed! "the tactile face of God." A grand finale to a beautiful poem, Emile. Congratulations for an excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2021 7:06:00 AM

Thanks, Susan, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/31/2021 7:33:00 PM

Beautiful dear Emile.... Congrats on your win :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/31/2021 4:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2021 4:27:00 PM

Thanks, Malabika, I appreciate both your comments and the placement my friend, Emile.