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All At Sea

Pirates 

P l u n d e r

Treasure


Sailors

A b a n d o n

Galleon

IN Just A Few Words Poetry Contest


Sponsored By Joseph May

20/28/20

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2020

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November 18, 2020 at 5:19 PM

Such vibrant imagery, Jan. A swashbuckling story in six words.. simply amazing! Your brevity is greatly admired. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Joseph's contest.. ~Susan

November 19, 2020 at 1:01 AM

thanks so much Susan:-) hugs jan xx

November 1, 2020 at 12:58 PM

Reminds me of Johnny Depp, Pirates of the Caribbean... Cleverly done.

November 3, 2020 at 1:42 PM

Thanks Marilene:-) hugs jan xx

October 31, 2020 at 11:18 PM

Back to tell you how happy I am with your top placement Jan! And thank you for your lovely comments today. Hugs ~ John

November 3, 2020 at 1:41 PM

Thanks for your support in so many ways John, you inspire me:-) hugs jan xx

Anitha Jayasankar

October 31, 2020 at 10:33 PM

Just loved it Jan. Hearty congrats on your win.. Hugs... ~ Ani

November 3, 2020 at 1:41 PM

Thanks Ani:-) hugs jan xx

October 31, 2020 at 8:25 PM

Looks like you may have to yell 'Man overboard there!' Congrats on your win, Jan! :) gw

November 3, 2020 at 1:36 PM

thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

October 31, 2020 at 6:13 PM

Congrats on your win Jan, well done

November 3, 2020 at 1:36 PM

thanks Pixie:-) hugs jan xx

October 31, 2020 at 3:44 PM

Brings about wonderful imagery! Congratulations, Jan!

November 3, 2020 at 1:35 PM

thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

October 31, 2020 at 1:57 PM

Congratulations, Jan, on your win for this lovely piece!!

November 3, 2020 at 1:34 PM

thanks Newton:-) hugs jan xx

October 31, 2020 at 1:03 PM

Very nicely done Jan, Congrats on your win..

November 3, 2020 at 1:33 PM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 31, 2020 at 11:45 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 31, 2020 at 11:47 AM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

October 31, 2020 at 11:32 AM

Love it Jan! Congratulations on the win! Linda

October 31, 2020 at 11:47 AM

Thanks so much Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

October 31, 2020 at 11:11 AM

Hi Jan, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

October 31, 2020 at 11:46 AM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2020 at 2:08 PM

- Captain Sabeltann's Pirate Night ... sparkling like gold, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 30, 2020 at 2:25 PM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

October 30, 2020 at 7:43 AM

Plundering poetry, Jan:)

October 30, 2020 at 12:53 PM

thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

October 30, 2020 at 12:33 AM

Arrr, ahoy matey! A rollicking good pirate write, me hearty! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs ~ John

October 30, 2020 at 4:35 AM

Thanks John:-) hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

October 29, 2020 at 2:47 PM

Like the ship Jan that just got hijacked by 7 Nigeria's. Jan are or have you been watching the 4 part drama program on I.T.V The Sister I think it's brilliant but it has been absoloutely slated by critics and viewers alike I

October 29, 2020 at 3:49 PM

so glad the hijacking got resolved safely and i've not seen the sister, thanks for the recommendation will try and get it on i player xx

October 29, 2020 at 10:28 AM

Such a wonderful picture you created Jan! Best of luck in the contest. And, I went back and looked up your "pudding" poem. What a delight! Pure Jan Allison! Have you looked up the classic humorous poems by Ogden Nash? Blessings of laughter to you!

October 29, 2020 at 10:52 AM

Thanks for dropping by to read Just Desserts its one of my favourite poems I can recite it off by heart. I am not well read with poetry I will look up Ogden nash, i loved Lear's limericks but am not au fait with the 'greats' :-( hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

October 29, 2020 at 4:57 AM

Love this. God bless you, sweet lady :)

October 29, 2020 at 10:49 AM

Thanks Regina you are so kind with your lovely comments:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

October 29, 2020 at 4:47 AM

Perfect! You ran away with the bounty, matey!

October 29, 2020 at 10:49 AM

thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

October 28, 2020 at 5:27 PM

You stole the treasure dear Jan, its in the bag wink wink, love your luminous line, win win !!!

October 28, 2020 at 5:33 PM

I hope Joseph likes it:-) i think the contest will fill quickly so i got my poem posted as soon as it was written:-) hugs jan xx

October 28, 2020 at 4:02 PM

Treasure Island came into my mind as I was reading (no Johnny Depp in that film sadly lol). so much said in so few words, cleverly done Jan, Emilia : )

October 28, 2020 at 5:32 PM

thanks Emilia:-) hugs jan xx

October 28, 2020 at 1:14 PM

WoW!Jan, You did a good job with the contest theme. Good imagery as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

October 28, 2020 at 5:31 PM

so delighted to see yoyu adding the video cc

October 28, 2020 at 1:00 PM

Love those nautical poems Jan, especially those with a pirate theme. Watched a series once called Black Sails, your verse brought it all back ohhh arrrr. Tom

October 28, 2020 at 5:28 PM

thanks Tom:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

October 28, 2020 at 12:49 PM

Hope there were no sharks :) ~~

October 28, 2020 at 3:28 PM

no sharks no Victor!:-) hugs jan xx

October 28, 2020 at 12:44 PM

Great one, Jan good luck in the contest.Hugs. Eve

October 28, 2020 at 3:17 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

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