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All Around Me

As I wake to that obnoxious alarm I look around and notice nothing new I brush my teeth Look in the mirror All I see is me Same routine Day in, day out The world around me remains unchanged I wake to the obnoxious alarm Everything seems to be the same

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2015 12:34:00 AM

Hi Arren,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/2/2015 12:26:00 AM

Arren, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Julie Clark

Date: 8/1/2015 11:51:00 PM

lol i totally agree i really like your poem we have to break with routine and find something new

Ian Jones

Date: 8/1/2015 2:51:00 PM

I know the feeling. Well expressed. Kind regards, Ian