All Around Me

As I wake to that obnoxious alarm
I look around and notice nothing new
I brush my teeth
Look in the mirror
All I see is me
Same routine
Day in, day out
The world around me remains unchanged
I wake to the obnoxious alarm
Everything seems to be the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 3, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Hi Arren,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 2, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Arren, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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August 1, 2015 at 11:51 PM
lol i totally agree i really like your poem we have to break with routine and find something new
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August 1, 2015 at 2:51 PM
I know the feeling. Well expressed. Kind regards, Ian
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