Susan Palli Poet Couplet

All Angels Weep

United angelic sons rent in two,
One side rebellious, the other true.

The heavenly holy bright angels weep,
Witnessing hate and violence and grief.

The devious and loathsome dark angels weep 
witnessing devotion of honest sheep.

The evil spirit realm influencing world leaders
Use all types of media, religions, and speakers.

My devastated heart is shredded and sighs
seeing all of us trapped and tormented inside.

Turmoil we suffer, regardless of our stance
till weeping will soon be a thing of the past.

With lightening speed our Savior will appear,
And repair the damage and dry all our tears!




May 3, 2016

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J Wilton Jones February 5, 2017 at 11:57 AM Hopeful and inspiring Thanks!

Bl Devnath May 13, 2016 at 9:28 PM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Susan Palli May 15, 2016 at 11:34 AM Thanks, BL! Have a nice day.

Beautiful Scars May 13, 2016 at 11:03 AM Susan, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo Susan Palli May 13, 2016 at 11:37 AM Thank you so much for the contest and placing my poem, Luloo!

Dineen Williams Gault May 7, 2016 at 6:27 AM It's rare that I see dark angels addressed, I appreciate that, as well as the ending when tears shall be no more. Great write! Susan Palli May 10, 2016 at 11:38 AM Thank you for your nice words, Dineen.

Gordon Mcconnell May 5, 2016 at 11:15 AM Great imagery and fine insightful thought displayed here Susan, blessings, Gordon PS: thanks for soupmail, will answer in a few days, been busy. Susan Palli May 6, 2016 at 1:26 AM Thank you Gordon!

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2016 at 3:39 PM excellent ending on this one. One day there will be no more weeping on this earth for all will be judged and life as we know it will be all changed. It was interesting that you had bad AND good angels shown in this little poem, Susan. Susan Palli May 6, 2016 at 1:25 AM Thank you Andrea! I appreciate the encouragement!

Constance La France May 3, 2016 at 8:16 AM Susan, this is a great write for the contest, those dark angels weeping is a nice touch, I am loving this 7 ~ Susan Palli May 3, 2016 at 1:07 PM Thank you so much!

John Hamilton May 3, 2016 at 8:01 AM Nice Susan, let's keep those dark angels weeping, good witness, thanks John Susan Palli May 3, 2016 at 1:05 PM Thank you, John! Susan Palli May 3, 2016 at 1:04 PM Thank you, John!