Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

All Aboard

Softly the snow falls from a silent diamond studded sky 
while inside the musicians play soft mellow Christmas music  
on fine tuned guitars, magical flutes and ebony keys 

An angel breath away from Christmas Santa's village 
is humming with excitement, ivory go karts come and go   
carrying toys for all children of the earth  

O'er by the conifers, Old Saint Nick parks his shiny red sleigh 
as the town clock strikes midnight a magical voyage begins 
from an aerial view you can spot the old train coming into view

All Aboard !!!

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Ink Empress November 27, 2023 at 12:15 AM Your poem is absolutely magical and captivating: I really loved the opening lines the alliterations and soft delicate imagery that er the drew me right in along with Fine tuned guitars ebony keys. Soul warming write this is sweet rose. Pleasure reading: hope xmas holidays will go well too Mystic Rose Rose November 28, 2023 at 3:49 AM Your comments are always soul healing my friend.

Clifford Villalon November 26, 2023 at 9:54 AM There's a symphonic orchestra under the snow flakes falling from the angels' clouds... Christmas is coming! :) Your hearth from within warms the hearts of the cold weather. Good health and hugs to you, Dear Poetess! Cliff Mystic Rose Rose November 26, 2023 at 1:44 PM Thank you for your warm greeting Clifford :)

Silent One November 25, 2023 at 5:44 AM This is lovely my friend sharing such a great spirit.. Mystic Rose Rose November 26, 2023 at 1:44 PM Your comment gladdens my spirit S O

Charles Messina November 24, 2023 at 3:43 PM I can picture this in a snow globe.. Wonderful Christmas scene, Vie. Mystic Rose Rose November 24, 2023 at 9:15 PM What a pretty snow globe that would be

Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2023 at 1:37 PM - I never board before 1 December ... November is way too early for carols for me, Vie Rose :) - A lovely December poem :) - hugs Mystic Rose Rose November 24, 2023 at 9:15 PM Yes a little early to think of xmas, but here at home I live with a real Mr Santa he starts early decorating,

Darlene De Beaulieu November 24, 2023 at 10:40 AM Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I enjoyed the train ride. BHugs. /DaRELENE/ Mystic Rose Rose November 24, 2023 at 9:15 PM Glad you enjoyed it Darlene, thanks for the visit

Daniel Turner November 24, 2023 at 6:03 AM Not yet, Please. However I'll bet those elves are pulling double shifts and drinking extra hot chocolate trying to get ready for the big event:) Dare I say it? Merry Christmas Rose. Mystic Rose Rose November 24, 2023 at 9:14 PM Yes they are working over time this year, lots of jovial elves getting ready for the big shindig

Joseph P. DiMino November 24, 2023 at 5:09 AM Lovely Christmas poem! Not the same trip though for Santa these days: with far fewer fireplaces, Rudolf having to navigate the gauntlet of spy balloons and early warning missile systems...Geez! Perhaps Santa and the deers should hitch a ride with an alien shuttle? Mystic Rose Rose November 24, 2023 at 9:13 PM Now your talking Joe, I hear Santa was invited inside their little alien ship, and was given hot chocolate with little antennae aliens frolicking about and singing Happy New Year,