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All Aboard

Softly the snow falls from a silent diamond studded sky while inside the musicians play soft mellow Christmas music on fine tuned guitars, magical flutes and ebony keys An angel breath away from Christmas Santa's village is humming with excitement, ivory go karts come and go carrying toys for all children of the earth O'er by the conifers, Old Saint Nick parks his shiny red sleigh as the town clock strikes midnight a magical voyage begins from an aerial view you can spot the old train coming into view All Aboard !!!

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/27/2023 12:15:00 AM

Your poem is absolutely magical and captivating: I really loved the opening lines the alliterations and soft delicate imagery that er the drew me right in along with Fine tuned guitars ebony keys. Soul warming write this is sweet rose. Pleasure reading: hope xmas holidays will go well too

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/28/2023 3:49:00 AM

Your comments are always soul healing my friend.

Clifford Villalon

Date: 11/26/2023 9:54:00 AM

There's a symphonic orchestra under the snow flakes falling from the angels' clouds... Christmas is coming! :) Your hearth from within warms the hearts of the cold weather. Good health and hugs to you, Dear Poetess! Cliff

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/26/2023 1:44:00 PM

Thank you for your warm greeting Clifford :)

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2023 5:44:00 AM

This is lovely my friend sharing such a great spirit..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/26/2023 1:44:00 PM

Your comment gladdens my spirit S O

Charles Messina

Date: 11/24/2023 3:43:00 PM

I can picture this in a snow globe.. Wonderful Christmas scene, Vie.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/24/2023 9:15:00 PM

What a pretty snow globe that would be

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2023 1:37:00 PM

- I never board before 1 December ... November is way too early for carols for me, Vie Rose :) - A lovely December poem :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/24/2023 9:15:00 PM

Yes a little early to think of xmas, but here at home I live with a real Mr Santa he starts early decorating,

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/24/2023 10:40:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I enjoyed the train ride. BHugs. /DaRELENE/

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/24/2023 9:15:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Darlene, thanks for the visit

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/24/2023 6:03:00 AM

Not yet, Please. However I'll bet those elves are pulling double shifts and drinking extra hot chocolate trying to get ready for the big event:) Dare I say it? Merry Christmas Rose.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/24/2023 9:14:00 PM

Yes they are working over time this year, lots of jovial elves getting ready for the big shindig

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/24/2023 5:09:00 AM

Lovely Christmas poem! Not the same trip though for Santa these days: with far fewer fireplaces, Rudolf having to navigate the gauntlet of spy balloons and early warning missile systems...Geez! Perhaps Santa and the deers should hitch a ride with an alien shuttle?

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/24/2023 9:13:00 PM

Now your talking Joe, I hear Santa was invited inside their little alien ship, and was given hot chocolate with little antennae aliens frolicking about and singing Happy New Year,