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I added a semi colon and dust clad this morning, and lengthened the title

It was late when I wrote it and was rather tired..'

Oh how sweet the taste of living, its soothing full; and joy.. This spring..' roll fields of clover, where ride the horse & boy when wide blue sky is stretching, and forest boughs show green there sweetly smile the maidens, as farmers feel like kings upon the shaded benches, people sit this day; the lark is rising steeply where winds a dust clad; pilgrims way..'

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Date: 1/26/2022 10:30:00 PM
Hello Paul, I Don't claim it as mine really I Beleive all true poetry flows from God I Am merely a conduit (which is a great privilege) Maybe there is more of me in the mediocre Pieces, but in all truth everything either spiritual Or physical is the Lords so it's academic If we get right down to it.'
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Date: 1/26/2022 6:57:00 PM
Joe, I'm astonished at the depth of your poetry, let alone its poetic merit. Your poems are truly remarkable. I have read "Alive the Spring" several times and thoroughly enjoyed each reading (just one example). All the best, Paul
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Date: 5/19/2016 10:14:00 PM
Nicely done
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2022 11:33:00 AM
Hi Pashang thank you.'
Date: 2/6/2016 1:04:00 PM
Reading this lovely piece with its colorful imagery, I am very much looking forward to the unfolding of spring and the rebirth it brings! Love it! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2022 11:35:00 AM
Hello Pandita, I was not aware I had not replied to comments On this older writeups; warm wishes to you.'
Date: 11/13/2015 10:39:00 AM
read it
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2022 11:36:00 AM
Hi Nathan, just getting round to Replying to comments on this Thank you for reading; hope you Are well.'
Date: 11/6/2015 1:01:00 PM
This is a Sprintime delight! It's a 7 b/c rhyme, images, setting, and feeling of the season ALL work in this lovely write.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2022 11:38:00 AM
Hello Edylnn, Great comment on This so glad to see your visit best Wishes Joe.'
Date: 10/29/2015 5:24:00 PM
7++ Superbly crafted with excellent cadence, rhyming and language! BRAVO my friend. Best wishes, Keith
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2022 11:39:00 AM
Hello old friend, you were Impeccable all your time on Soup always an honour to Hear from you'
Date: 10/25/2015 6:32:00 PM
I put my instructions here so you could look right up and see what you were doing. hahaha (I always follow the golden rule. I would want someone to do that for me. I can't be bothered seeing something at Soupmail and then forgetting how to do it by the time I am in the other place!!!)
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Date: 10/24/2015 6:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your rhyme that has great rhyme, rhythm, and flow..Poetic with an old world feel to the poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/27/2022 11:40:00 AM
Hi Sara, good to see your Kind words here, many many Thanks.'
Date: 10/21/2015 9:30:00 PM
I came here so I can explain to you how to fave a poem!! So click on the person's poem, as I have done here to yours. scroll up above the poem where you see Poet's Notes. Just above poet's notes you will see in tiny letters the word Fav POEM. Above that is fave poet if you want to click on a person as a fave poet. Hope that helps. luv Andrea
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Joe Maverick
Date: 10/22/2015 1:47:00 AM
I can see it now I got stuck looking on members area last night, I knew I'd seen it somewhere but got a case of tunnel vision..' or maybe soup vision L O L))) I wonder why you wrote me here instead of 'soup mail'? naughty naughty..' I am noting all this behaviour down I may add Andrea, right.' I shall have to spend some time doing faves God bless..'
Date: 10/19/2015 4:00:00 PM
Very nice, Joe. A lovely piece of writing - enjoyed the read! Best regards! :-) john P.s A Seven.
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Date: 10/18/2015 8:10:00 PM
Joe, this is really good!!! One of your BEST. Gotta fave it!!
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