Alive and Right

"alive and right"

in a realm that is free to all
one gathers more than treasures
spirits breathe between mind and body
and forevermore remaining blessed
blessed to know such wonderment

away from beauty I'm lost and alone
one moment within your world I'm alive
healing are the golden sands
mesmerizing are the rolling tides
enchanting are seagulls knowing the way

my soul opens seeing the far and wide
it stands tall with secrets and whispers
allowing thoughts and dreams to come true
granting eyes to see and ears to hear
fulfilling each of the senses to unfold

time after time each moment with you
the wonder of your world is always new
like a sunrise or sunset that reflects
crystal waters shine their reflections
suddenly everything is alive and right

SkyWatcher
04-29-21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Romios Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 8:17 AM
I truly love your poetic artistry. Pangie xx
Ricci Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Hello Pangie. Thank you very much for such a gracious and wonderful review and commentary. Never do I take words for granted. I am glad you liked the entry. I look forward to turning to your page very soon. Enjoy the weekend and poetry soup as well.
Rose  Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 3:14 PM
It is so healing being able to lose ourselves in a moment of beauty, be it the sea, the mountains or a sentient being that connects to you. Well written dear Lisa. Thank you for sharing your heart today, be well :)
Ricci Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Hello Mystic Rose - Thank you very much for such a beautiful response that truly compliments the entry.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:20 AM
I love all poems that deal with the sea. You did well. Hugs.
Ricci Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Hello Victor - Thank you very much and I so agree with your words on the sea. Have a wonderful day always.
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