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Alienation

After blissful years together marital conflicts begun, normal for any marriage but for our daughter no fun. Our capricious decision, separation was the call, to alienate my daughter from me, not the deal at all. Why do you chastise me like a malignant growth, your own minds inner conflict, you forget our oath. Pretentious plans of caring for her, your scapegoat, Your sad behavior and control, about this you gloat. I will continue to dissipate all this in vain, to gravitate away from this inflicted pain. Do you realize how much damage? you impose on our daughter with your rage. She pretends not to acknowledge me, to flatter you, your mothers past on you inflicted is the clue. Your inurbane manner affects our daughter’s future state, those many heart breaking days restricted by a physical gate. Please read the many professionals perspicuous reports about our story, She needs her daddy, although alienated this is all transitory………........ My daughter loves and needs me, and will get me, the END.
08/30/2016

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Date: 9/4/2016 6:10:00 AM
Seems to be about vixen type wives and I have seen many. Yor poem was awesome in rhymin n meaning n appealing in yor plea to her for daughters sake. For me a masterpiece to read today and glad I availed of it. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/5/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thank you for reading I appreciate your comments - i definitely will read your poem eclipse
Date: 8/30/2016 6:04:00 AM
Absolutely heartbreaking write Mark - having read some of your other poems I know how much you adore your daughter. Do you realize how much damage? you impose on our daughter with your rage.' Is the line that hit me the most - it must be hard enough for a child to cope with the actual split. Sadly this scenario is something that happens all too often:-( hugs Jan xx
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 8/30/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thanks for reading and comments Jan - the issue is also the justice system, seems extremely sexist in our country. Mark
Date: 8/30/2016 4:19:00 AM
Touching and painful ... Cost of individuality ...
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 8/30/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you for reading Probir Regards, MArk

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