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Alienated Fate

ALIENATED FATE Is life but just a game, Are we all made the same, Do we seek money, fame, And only look for gain, And every day begin the game, All over again! The wealthy need compassion But just point and blame, Leaving an unsavory stain, No matter the country, its Location or terrain! The poor, no chance for school And hungry in their pain, Suffer war, strife, poverty And death, know Not the meaning vain, And do not ever feign or Dare to deign, To be like them, they could Not travel down a Rich man’s lane! Meanwhile the politicians Banter on, saying their main Concern reform, the poor Get poorer, bane Of their lives equality, But pleas ignored, left out, In torrential rain! The rich with bowler hat, New suit and cane, Beware, your future will Hold no moon to wane! This planet’s life’s long yearn, To achieve uniformity, and Inherently apply the will to learn!

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Ann Foster

Date: 1/20/2020 8:52:00 AM

What fun. Excellent write and use of words. Love the story... that patterns the entire way. A great work to read. Ann

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/23/2020 9:59:00 AM

Ann you are so cute and different - I love your book and only have 30 pages left to read. Lovely comment, Blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2020 9:44:00 AM

The politicians are controlled by the rich who sets the rules for the game..

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/19/2020 10:53:00 PM

Yup, most probably you are quite right - sad to see what a lot money does to people. Very relevant comment my friend, Blessings, Jennifer

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 7:19:00 AM

And what is stinking rich but, a kick in the face of the poor folks. though there are a few rich who have no qualms about helping people in need but, sadly they are quite few. Pity the rich who never know the joy of sharing. Well penned.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/19/2020 10:48:00 PM

Well said MLK ,A wise comment, the rich who don't give need pity. The rich who don't give are all scrooges, the - God i omnipresent and omnipotent - he sees all. Blessings, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/13/2020 10:43:00 AM

It would seem that the rich are to be pitied as it is difficult for them to get through the gates of Heaven. Therefore the poor in fact would seem to have the advantage. The story of the rich man and Lazarus comes to mind. Still their is hope for both as it does not say it is impossible. Mark 9:23 Is worth a read.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/19/2020 10:38:00 PM

Thanks Richard i will read Mark 9.23. Thank-you for such for an apt answer to my poem, Blessings, Jennifer.

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/12/2020 8:15:00 AM

Lovely write my dear friend...you truly are an ambassador from heaven...poetic hugs from the Wingster~Jennster :o)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/13/2020 6:38:00 AM

Hi Wingster, Thank-you, a wonderful comment and compliment - hope you have an awesome 2020. Blessings and hugs, Jennster.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/12/2020 7:31:00 AM

Your social consciousness is displayed here and your poem speaks loud and clear. Well done, Jennifer!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2020 7:01:00 AM

More so those of faith because really does the world ever have our best interest at heart.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/13/2020 6:37:00 AM

Thank-you Kim - i feel strongly that the governments of the world should do as much as they can for the poor, otherwise a world wide revolution will come about! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/11/2020 10:29:00 AM

A great social comment penned so well Jenny, this is one of your best pieces I would say as it stirs up the grey matter to think on the increasing gap between the rich and the poor more and more and you probably see it even more where you are. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/11/2020 11:35:00 AM

Thank-you Gordon, I cannot pass a person, man or woman that I can see look sober but in dire straits, I always give them something, no matter the amount. A lovely comment my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/11/2020 7:08:00 AM

The divide between the rich and those below them gets wider. Greed and I'm alright Jack, stuff everyone else attitude gets worse. People in the UK, working long hours and still having to rely on food banks says a lot. Hope your new year going well. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/11/2020 11:25:00 AM

Thanks Tom, your comment is so true, but politicians once they are in power, join the culture of the very rich, and their words and promises ring false and empty. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/10/2020 10:36:00 AM

Your poem is an eyeopener to many politicians, Jenny. Financially the rich have a big say in electing the leaders of countries (expecting something in return); unfortunately the poor are condemned to stay poor (even though they too have a vote). ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/16/2020 8:39:00 AM

You have done admirable work, Joe, and I raise my hat to you! There are many NGOs who give a lot without expecting anything in return. The rich I talk about are those who influence elections, etc because it is in their interest to do so. Regards // paul

Joe Dimino
Date: 1/11/2020 8:23:00 PM

I guess we just travel in different circles. The rich I know are very generous, came to this country (the USA) speaking little English and with barely more that the shirts of their backs. As for the poor (not all, but many), I ran a non-profit organization for 10 years (took no salary, little sleep for I supporting myself working nights as a laborer); helped thousands receive free food, clothing, shelter, medical equipment, etc, and not one of them was poor because of the rich. No parents. Bad parents. Mental health issues, drug addiction, but not poor for lack of agencies and individuals willing to give a helping hand.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/11/2020 11:14:00 AM

You are absolutely right Paul, but the poor although able to vote, have little say - a wonderful comment, thank-you.Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2020 8:16:00 PM

great message and very well rhymed, Jennifer. So sad how the rich are getting richer and the poor are getting poorer. what you said below to Gershon is true. Middle class is not as good as it was 20, maybe even ten years ago. rising health care costs have a lot to do with it in my country.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/10/2020 4:16:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Thank you for a wonderful relevant comment - it think that the rising cost of living is going to be a huge stumbling block. May you be always blessed Andrea, Jennifer. Reply

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/9/2020 1:43:00 PM

A very insightful write about the sad state of affairs for far too many dear people of this world. As the old saying goes, it seems "the rich get richer and the poor get poorer!" Many thanks, Jenn, for stopping by to comment on 2 of my recent concoctions. Best to you and yours this New Year - Bob H

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/9/2020 2:12:00 PM

Thanks Bob, a very apt and sincere comment, people should stop being ostriches and stop burring their heads in the sand and see the plight that this world has been immersed into. Best wishes my friend, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/9/2020 12:54:00 PM

Well,... on one hand, all true... On the other hand, a middle-class, average citizen of a Western country lives better than Kings did just 150 years ago. We have hear, a/c, lawn services, washers, dryers, indoor plumbing. Wow. Are we blessed!! 'A rising tide lifts all (grateful) boats! Thanks, Jen, :) gwiiii

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2020 2:07:00 PM

It's a matter of perspective, perhaps... I would also agree in regards to many African countries and some Arab lands that things are dire.::) gw

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/9/2020 2:09:00 PM

I beg to differ my friend, the lower middle class worldwide are slowly joining the ranks of the poor, especially in 3rd world countries. Cost of living is soaring and the poor are by far in the majority, we are in for shock waves that will rock planet earth! Furthermore, we are depleting our natural resources and polluting our already traumatized world with further pollution, which has even spread to outer space. Blessings, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/8/2020 2:32:00 PM

The gap between the "haves" and "have nots" is widening, Jennifer. A single income used to be enough to support a family, but now families struggle with two incomes. We need to elect leaders who recognize these problems and help low-income families stay afloat. A powerful, thought-provoking poem, Jennifer. Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2020 12:56:00 PM

Well, on one hand all true... On the other hand, a middle class citizen in the West lives better than did Kings just 150 years ago: Cars, Heat, A/C, Washers and dryers, indoor plumbing, etc... So, it's all perspective. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/9/2020 10:12:00 AM

Thank-you Carolyn, your input is always such an immense pleasure and honor to read. Blessings,w Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/8/2020 4:51:00 AM

This is excellent and so well written! I hope this poem soars to the top my friend if for the monorhyme contest. Have a blessed new year my friend! : ) xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/8/2020 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Connie, you are such a darling, I am proud to be your friend. Blessings dear Connie, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/7/2020 10:28:00 AM

powerful and so much truth in your words my dear friend...the rich just keep getting richer...the poor stay poor and those of us in the middle are the ones struggling most to stay afloat... hugs and blessings my friend... glad to see your muse active :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/7/2020 12:25:00 PM

well i for one am glad to hear that :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 11:10:00 AM

Thanks Sandy, A wonderful comment, yes my muse snuck back home a day or two ago. Blessings dear friend, Jennifer.

Ann Foster

Date: 1/7/2020 9:49:00 AM

Well written. Powerful imagery. Truth shines. Ann

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 11:08:00 AM

Thank-you dear Ann, hope you are well - page 95 - have made notes of ones I have faved. Blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2020 7:37:00 AM

- A wake-up call for many, dear friend Jenny - So unfair ... many have too much .... and many have too little ... heartbreaking - Thinking about what we spend on money, food and gifts for Christmas ... all expensive fireworks that cost many millions of dollars for New Year ... poff .. straight up in the air ... madness if you ask me - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 11:04:00 AM

The disparity is getting bigger and bigger, billionaires abound - a sad state of affairs my dear Anne-Lise - thank you for a wonderful comment dear friend, Blessings, Jennifer.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/6/2020 11:46:00 PM

We are not living in the Depression Era in the USA! I don't know about Africa. Any child born here gets free medical care and free schooling. In addition to free phones, and free food for families. Even the poor in tents, get Fed or state aid. We don't have rationed health care here. If poor, you can get state or fed aid. The wealthy in our Republic create JOBs. people are smart and choose how to live. Some do not want to work. They sell drugs instead.....PR

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 7:26:00 AM

Was not referring to any one country but generally to all the poor on planet earth! JP.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/6/2020 7:12:00 PM

Hard to see this happing when people so greed. Nicely done, Jennifer. Hugs Eve

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank-you Eve, your comment and support much appreciated my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/6/2020 6:25:00 PM

So true, the games people play will exact its price one day-

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 10:32:00 AM

Hi Michelle, A rich man's game is what it is - thank you for a great comment. Blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/5/2020 6:31:00 PM

Hello Jennifer … so much money is spent on weaponry. Is that to protect the poor and underprivileged. I doubt it. You've written a verse containing hard facts Jennifer, thank you - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 10:42:00 AM

Hi Lindsay, thank-you for a lovely comment - glad you enjoyed it, Blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 1/5/2020 2:46:00 PM

You are so right... Yet so many are ignorant to these... Money and greed seem to be very powerful and it's people lIke us who suffer... Great poem.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 10:43:00 AM

Thanks SO I appreciate your wonderful comment - blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2020 7:47:00 AM

Very deep and meaningful my friend--reigning truth. Yes--the world needs balance--so well said, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 10:54:00 AM

Thank-you Vijay, a profound comment ! Blessings, Jennifer.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/5/2020 7:44:00 AM

No doubt, the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. Promises, promises. Love this, Jennifer. Great write! Hugs Charlie

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/7/2020 11:01:00 AM

Thank-you Charlie for a brilliant comment. I predict a world wide revolution in the next generation - this unhealthy situation is getting worse daily! Blessings, Jennifer.