Alienated

Walking through the aisle of time
The space is like giving you no air
Freedom is not like something that you want
You are too reluctant of breaking the rule

You are born into another shape
Too bad the shape doesn't fit you
You hope for a better chance
The embrace fade like it has to

Your head is lost in its crowd
But your lips taped for a shut
Your voice is like choking
But your hands survive to scream it out loud

Your pride was taken
Your tone and privacy
Your world shrink
But the remain happiness still exist

You try to adapt
The strange new world challenged you
Afar from the way that you lived
But still you deserve for a second win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 7:21 PM
this is an excellent start to your daily excercise of writing. I am at my sister inlaws and got on her computer to see what was happening on the soup, Iam so glad I stopped to read this excellent poem.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Thank you for giving your time to read my poem today :D, and thanks fro the advise too, I'm still working on it, :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D , hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Yanny my friend, you have a deep and touching poem today - Well written - I wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Anne you always make my day too :D, wishing you a wonderful weekend too :D - hug, yanny
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