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Alienated

Walking through the aisle of time The space is like giving you no air Freedom is not like something that you want You are too reluctant of breaking the rule You are born into another shape Too bad the shape doesn't fit you You hope for a better chance The embrace fade like it has to Your head is lost in its crowd But your lips taped for a shut Your voice is like choking But your hands survive to scream it out loud Your pride was taken Your tone and privacy Your world shrink But the remain happiness still exist You try to adapt The strange new world challenged you Afar from the way that you lived But still you deserve for a second win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/8/2013 7:21:00 PM
this is an excellent start to your daily excercise of writing. I am at my sister inlaws and got on her computer to see what was happening on the soup, Iam so glad I stopped to read this excellent poem.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/8/2013 9:46:00 PM
Thank you for giving your time to read my poem today :D, and thanks fro the advise too, I'm still working on it, :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D , hug, yanny
Date: 2/8/2013 12:47:00 PM
Yanny my friend, you have a deep and touching poem today - Well written - I wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/8/2013 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Anne you always make my day too :D, wishing you a wonderful weekend too :D - hug, yanny

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