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Alien Love Story

Space invader, Came from nowhere, Wants to be with me, Blinded by my beauty. He looks like a handsome alien, And I’m not afraid of him, We’re so in love and it deepens really, I’m smitten by his love that is extra ordinary. He is the king of space city, The people live there peacefully, No fighting, no envy, no misery, No loneliness for him and for me. My love, my dear so sweet, Thanks, we’ve finally met, I will fly with you today, We will live together in harmony. 10th Place Winner For SKAT's "Fantasy" contest

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Date: 6/17/2013 5:25:00 PM
Well written fantasy... congrats on your win.... Jake
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Date: 6/17/2013 12:20:00 PM
Maria,, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:38:00 AM
Hello my very dear friend! Reading this once again makes my imagination works, lol. How I wish I'll meet one also. This is a great write indeed! How I wish you've entered this in the contest before. By the way, thanks a lot for your very wonderful & inspiring comments on my poem today! Again, enjoy your grand vacation! Hope I'll do mine soon! Take care always! God bless! Please give my regards to your love ones/family! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 4/10/2013 1:10:00 PM
what an unusual and fantastic story Marie, love it xx
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Date: 4/10/2013 1:00:00 PM
- Do not fly so far ..... come back soon - Nice to read, Maria. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/8/2013 11:12:00 AM
Great poem. I really liked your use of words. Take care & keep up the good work.
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Date: 4/8/2013 10:34:00 AM
Wow! This is amazing story & poem my dear friend Maria! I'm so much delighted reading it tonight. Great write indeed! How I wish I'll meet also another one one of these days ;)). Good luck and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora
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