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Alien Abduction

The door slid open the sweat poured down Gasping for breath we did not drown Time was up we were abused No human hand, I mused A laser of light What a fright Space men Ten. © ~GG~ 7/06/2012 Entry for: Imagination Contest by nette Mandy Tams ~Golden Girl~

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Harry Horsman

Date: 11/8/2012 7:27:00 AM

your immagination is prevalent here (or is it?) see this was a winner also, and deserved.....

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/8/2012 7:56:00 AM

I was really abducted, lol... not really, then again who knows? xx

Anne P. Murray

Date: 7/27/2012 9:01:00 AM

Very original as all your delightful poems are. You are very creative Blessings...Anne

Fabiyas M V

Date: 6/15/2012 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win,Mandy!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2012 3:36:00 PM

CCCCongrats on your win...Great work that is in the winners' list..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/14/2012 3:33:00 PM

congrats on your contest win with this eerie alien abduction, I like how you introduced rhyme into your nonet...yes I can imagine how hillsborough brought back those sad memories for you, I too know the pain of that loss and have written a number of poems on the subject...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2012 9:14:00 PM

MANDY, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2012 7:39:00 PM

Gosh, I have no clue how to do this contest. I think you are not the first one to see them as aliens! Great imagination in this one, Mandy.

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/8/2012 12:56:00 PM

Nice, you even added rhyming to this one! Looks like something Nette will like.

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/8/2012 6:30:00 AM

nice write,wish you the best in the contest,go get them GG,LOL

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2012 9:32:00 PM

Hi Mandy, this sounds like the story i use to tell my mom, when i was little... lol~~~ a deep imagination one can have..good luck in the contest..pd

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/7/2012 6:40:00 PM

Interesting poem... well written... good luck! Terry

Diane Christian

Date: 6/7/2012 3:34:00 PM

thasnks for your kind comments on my poetry, aww I used to like alien films lol God bless from diane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/7/2012 1:54:00 PM

Great imagination that you have...Enjoyed reading this top of the winners' cirlce for sure work..Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for letting me know that I left out a word..Sara

David Williams

Date: 6/7/2012 11:06:00 AM

Mandy, great nonet, quick close the door...David

Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2012 10:53:00 AM

Wow, I love this imaginative one, Mandy. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )