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Alien Abduction

The door slid open the sweat poured down
Gasping for breath we did not drown
Time was up we were abused
No human hand, I mused
A laser of light
What a fright
Space men  
Ten.
©  ~GG~ 7/06/2012
Entry for:  Imagination Contest by nette
Mandy Tams ~Golden Girl~

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Harry Horsman Date: 11/8/2012 7:27:00 AM your immagination is prevalent here (or is it?) see this was a winner also, and deserved..... Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/8/2012 7:56:00 AM I was really abducted, lol... not really, then again who knows? xx

Anne P. Murray Date: 7/27/2012 9:01:00 AM Very original as all your delightful poems are. You are very creative Blessings...Anne Login to Reply

Fabiyas M V Date: 6/15/2012 7:54:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win,Mandy! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/14/2012 3:36:00 PM CCCCongrats on your win...Great work that is in the winners' list..Sara Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 6/14/2012 3:33:00 PM congrats on your contest win with this eerie alien abduction, I like how you introduced rhyme into your nonet...yes I can imagine how hillsborough brought back those sad memories for you, I too know the pain of that loss and have written a number of poems on the subject... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/14/2012 12:56:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Mandy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/13/2012 9:14:00 PM MANDY, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2012 7:39:00 PM Gosh, I have no clue how to do this contest. I think you are not the first one to see them as aliens! Great imagination in this one, Mandy. Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 6/8/2012 12:56:00 PM Nice, you even added rhyming to this one! Looks like something Nette will like. Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 6/8/2012 6:30:00 AM nice write,wish you the best in the contest,go get them GG,LOL Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/7/2012 9:32:00 PM Hi Mandy, this sounds like the story i use to tell my mom, when i was little... lol~~~ a deep imagination one can have..good luck in the contest..pd Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 6/7/2012 6:40:00 PM Interesting poem... well written... good luck! Terry Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 6/7/2012 3:34:00 PM thasnks for your kind comments on my poetry, aww I used to like alien films lol God bless from diane Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/7/2012 1:54:00 PM Great imagination that you have...Enjoyed reading this top of the winners' cirlce for sure work..Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for letting me know that I left out a word..Sara Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 6/7/2012 11:06:00 AM Mandy, great nonet, quick close the door...David Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/7/2012 10:53:00 AM Wow, I love this imaginative one, Mandy. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : ) Login to Reply