Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Nonet

Alien Abduction

The door slid open the sweat poured down
Gasping for breath we did not drown
Time was up we were abused
No human hand, I mused
A laser of light
What a fright
Space men  
Ten.
©  ~GG~ 7/06/2012
Entry for:  Imagination Contest by nette
Mandy Tams ~Golden Girl~

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Harry Horsman November 8, 2012 at 7:27 AM your immagination is prevalent here (or is it?) see this was a winner also, and deserved..... Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 8, 2012 at 7:56 AM I was really abducted, lol... not really, then again who knows? xx

Anne P. Murray July 27, 2012 at 9:01 AM Very original as all your delightful poems are. You are very creative Blessings...Anne

Fabiyas M V June 15, 2012 at 7:54 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win,Mandy!

Sara Kendrick June 14, 2012 at 3:36 PM CCCCongrats on your win...Great work that is in the winners' list..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot June 14, 2012 at 3:33 PM congrats on your contest win with this eerie alien abduction, I like how you introduced rhyme into your nonet...yes I can imagine how hillsborough brought back those sad memories for you, I too know the pain of that loss and have written a number of poems on the subject...

Carol Sunshine Brown June 14, 2012 at 12:56 PM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A June 13, 2012 at 9:14 PM MANDY, congratulations in Nette's imaginations contest ;-) Good night*PD

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2012 at 7:39 PM Gosh, I have no clue how to do this contest. I think you are not the first one to see them as aliens! Great imagination in this one, Mandy.

Robert Pettit June 8, 2012 at 12:56 PM Nice, you even added rhyming to this one! Looks like something Nette will like.

Richard Palmer June 8, 2012 at 6:30 AM nice write,wish you the best in the contest,go get them GG,LOL

Poet Destroyer A June 7, 2012 at 9:32 PM Hi Mandy, this sounds like the story i use to tell my mom, when i was little... lol~~~ a deep imagination one can have..good luck in the contest..pd

Terry O'Leary June 7, 2012 at 6:40 PM Interesting poem... well written... good luck! Terry

Diane Christian June 7, 2012 at 3:34 PM thasnks for your kind comments on my poetry, aww I used to like alien films lol God bless from diane

Sara Kendrick June 7, 2012 at 1:54 PM Great imagination that you have...Enjoyed reading this top of the winners' cirlce for sure work..Thanks for stopping by..Thanks for letting me know that I left out a word..Sara

David Williams June 7, 2012 at 11:06 AM Mandy, great nonet, quick close the door...David

Jack Horne June 7, 2012 at 10:53 AM Wow, I love this imaginative one, Mandy. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )