Algae

Hop scotch not
Possible with these
Skinned knees
Bleeding.

Fish kisses wiping
Away the disparity and
Dismissing the
Consequence.

Admonishment so
Wholesome and
Irreverent.

Buried into the
Pillow now
Feathers disrobe.

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Nair Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Just checking in on your first poem posted here, excellent effort, friend, and a thorough job!! Jag
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ian. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:55 AM
I always like the childhood reflections, have written so much stuff about kids. This is great! You're in the kids mind and body. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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April 26, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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March 31, 2010 at 7:25 PM
yes! I love the freedom! of this art! Ian! I do this too! jimbo
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