Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Alerts of Autumn

procuring produce

                                 groundwork to confront jack frost ~

                                         bald trees witness all





PLACED :   1st

Autumn in Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllable count: PS
Date: 09-09-2022

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Susan Ashley September 22, 2022 at 8:14 PM Dear Patri, beautiful imagery, especially your last line for a great finale. A splendid haiku! Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:48 PM Thank you so much for the best compliments!

Eve Roper September 20, 2022 at 6:31 PM Great image, Patri. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings my friend Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:47 PM Thanks a lot for the best compliments!

MD Johnson September 18, 2022 at 8:09 AM Congratulations! — MDJ Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:46 PM Thank you so much!

Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 7:56 AM Congratulations for your win. Great poem :) Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:46 PM Thank you so much for the best compliments!

Linda Alice Fowler September 18, 2022 at 7:09 AM Very nice Patri! Congratulations on your win! Linda Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:46 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin September 18, 2022 at 3:45 AM Patri, congratulations on your first place win, love the last line! Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:45 PM Thank you so much for the best compliments!

Christuraj Alex September 17, 2022 at 7:38 PM "bald trees" - Great image. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana September 22, 2022 at 11:45 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments!

John Fleming September 9, 2022 at 7:28 AM Makes a quiet but subtle little impression on ones mind. Nicely penned! :) john Patri Venkata Ramana September 11, 2022 at 3:13 AM Thank you so much for reading my lines!