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Albatross Feather in Jeopardy

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Written: April 18, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Another atrocity: letting stone or lime tears slick. A majestic sight—an albatross-nurturing chick. Midway Island, where strings were hung. Birds covet between land and sea for their young. They saw a feast, a bounty to witness.  Human waste of all kinds is not worth swiftness. A dwarf chick gently waits till his parents return.  A fragile bird wept, fleeing from an unseen spurn. Below their skeptical gaze, the chick played.  His parents, as warden angels, never strayed. They opened their mouths and started to eat. In agony, they wept, shaking as if life retreat. Longing for a life, the birds once yearned.  They began to sing their hymn of peril termed. Survivors are clueless that men spread lethal flu. With a split heart, I stand in shame, void, and blue. Sans doubt, man is a fool—no care nor claim.  A tender poise between empathy and blame. Whoever enacts a crime will bear the shame.  Is it too late for any of us who are aware to tame?

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Date: 4/18/2024 7:43:00 PM
I hope we save the albatross. The theme of caring for the environment is a perfect April verse. The photograph is apt for the poem, and is picturesque as well.
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Date: 4/18/2024 4:27:00 PM
Your unique title captured my attention and made me wonder what I might expect from your words. I was not disappointed. I felt anger and sadness with the mention of atrocities. I loved the reference and implication in these words: A majestic sight—an albatross-nurturing chick. An albatross creates a magnificent image. The last verse resonated with me and will probably stay with me for a while. Have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/18/2024 1:12:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/picture. Your ending is powerful... Enjoy your day writing away.............
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